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Reviews for It's Not Just Sex

By : Daye
  • From Helgudo on February 14, 2018

    Shame this was never finished. It was more than a worthy sequel and was taking a fascinating direction.


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  • From ANON - Bob on August 11, 2016

    God I can't take it. Harry let them live. Whyyyy. Enemy combatants, rapists, terrorists, people who tortured him and his friends... And then the Harry Pansy issue. Christ. I wish this story would be updated because it's one of the few good H/P out there, but damn if I don't fucking hate where it's gone. Writing itself is good. 


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  • From ANON - Bob on August 11, 2016

    Wonderful, Hermione goes off and leaves because of her idiocy, gets caught and taken to Malfoy manner, making everyone else risk their lives and any chance to beat to the badguy in order to go save her ass. Perfect. I'd almost forgot how much I can't stand such stupid decision making. Good chap.


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  • From ANON - Bob on August 11, 2016

    I've got no sympathy for Hermione whatsoever. Not even a little bit. She's one of 4 people trying to stop a genocidal maniac who took over a country and is trying to kill everyone she cares about, and she's too caught up in her insecurities and teenage angst to act like something resembling a semi-mature young adult. Pathetic. 


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  • From Severus1snape on December 12, 2015
    hmmm
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  • From ANON - Marvus on November 17, 2015
    A really good series. Four years is a long time so I suspect no end is in sight, but I really loved this story. You're a bloody good writer. Maybe just a few more chapters to tell the story you want? So frustrating that there is no ending. Excellent work though!
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  • From ANON - Pansy parksinson on May 07, 2015
    Ok so it's been 4 years of a break.... Come back and fish please?
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  • From ANON - x on May 27, 2013
    Great stout I hope you continue it
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  • From ANON - LIGAYA on January 14, 2013
    I would REALLY like to read the Consequencs chapter & see this story to conclusion, with Harry & Pansy reconciled. The drama & angst has been fine do far, but I think it's enough. And I don't think Pansy & Hermione can ever be kumbaya, but Hermione should stop being such a bitch.
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  • From ANON - LIGAYA on November 20, 2012
    Please, please complete this story. It is so well done, kind of like an HP Romeo and Juliet, with Pansy being arbitrarily thrown in among the Golden Trio, inadvertently causing discord. The story plot unfolds logically and is high drama - in the good sense of the word - along with high smut. I know there has to be a lot of angst for drama's sake before Pansy & Harry get together again. BUT I WOULD REALLY LIKE Harry & Pansy to have a happily ever after - without them fucking other people in between Consequences and their ultimate reconciliation. And I love Hermione a lot, but in this story she's being such a bitch (but understandably so), I'd like her to be to be taken down a peg or two, and for her to apologize to Pansy eventually after Pansy rescues the Golden Trio. They can't be friends but can have a detente.

    What I DON'T WANT is a complete breakup between Harry & Pansy, or Pansy dying with a remorseful Harry. So there has to be hard times between Harry & Pansy but he has to admit to himself that he agreed to the plan & Pansy was coerced into what she did. I want Pansy to try to explain to Harry what happened, but he won' listen, to Hermione's & Ginny's glee. But Pansy isn't going to beg Harry. She'll do some missions - without the Golden Trio - for the Order that will convince them to trust her. The Golden Trio can't help but see her devotion & bravery. Harry is enraged & super-hurt at what he saw and what he thought happened, but then he should give some thought to how Pansy would feel watching him with Bellatrix.

    After some torturous months without Pansy, and realizing it's not fair to her to not allow her a chance to give her side, Harry owls her that he'd like to talk. It's telling that she accepts, but on the condition that they have tea only on neutral ground, with lots of other people around. Harry starts off by acknowledging that he accepted the plan, and - though he found it really hard to take - maybe they could try rebuilding a relationship, at least as friends. Pansy hears him out, and icily reminds him of his refusal & rejection to talk with her right after the Malfoy Manor incident. She also tells him it's pretty arrogant of him to think she's done anything that she needs to have to be forgiven for - especially by him. She leaves him flabbergasted.

    The Golden Trio learns that she has requested to not be assigned to the same missions as them, but when they occasionally go on the same mission, she's a professional & a team player - but none of them talk about the elephant in the room. Pansy has gained the grudging respect of Order members, and she's made friends with some. Eventually, she's asked out on dates & some wizards start to court her. This makes Harry jealous & sad, knowing he drove her away with his stupidity. Ron, and finally Hermione, realize Harry's unhappiness and try talking with him. This is where Harry unloads all his anger at Hermione for all the slights & insults to Pansy, and castigates himself for what he did, by commission or omission, to Pansy. And this is also where he decides to fight for and get back Pansy...[happily after ending].
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  • From ANON - Tiberianfest on August 26, 2012
    amazing story, i love the plot and charcters your making, hope more comes :)
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  • From Godogma on March 13, 2012
    Honestly, for something I'm reading on an adult fanfiction site I find myself in a real quandary; the Death Eaters as presented in the books simply aren't that smart (nor are they some massively well trained fighting force or any of that crap; the inner circle was held stymied in a running battle by 6 5th years - and also would have problems from being in Azkaban in several cases). Umbridge certainly isn't smart, though she is cruel and ignorant as are the rest so the situation of them showing up and trumping everything as well as the whole being able to almost instantly find the pair of Pansy and Harry at the wedding just doesn't ring true to me.

    Also the whole jealous stupid Hermione got old as well... Wards were never covered in canon, for fucks sake we don't even know that there were actually wards at Privet Drive - only that Dumbledore said there were. So reluctantly I'm going to give this a pass at this point. The writing is good to excellent and the sex scenes are well written but the technical side of things I just don't agree with the position we've seen in your story. Best of luck.
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  • From ANON - Meepo on October 15, 2011
    Like the story so far, got hooked on Harry/Pansy fics with yers, finished this and the first one in just a couple days, can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From kylanSB on October 06, 2011
    i know this is another story, but is there any possibilities of you continuing bossy in bed? really loved the danni/harry part. anyway your a great writer, love your stories, cheers
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  • From ANON - Tille on October 04, 2011
    I like the story.
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