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Reviews for Gripes and Groans

By : JanisJ
  • From Kimmimaru on June 28, 2012
    All I can say is; go Hermione! lol. Nice story as always, your style is captivating!
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  • From lordoberon on August 14, 2011
    this was goood! I think you have a good point about more than UST happening in that tent!!

    I loved the beginning. They were all so in character, and everything made me laugh. Ron's poor stomach!

    The rest was hot, too. I can see the three of them together. I do wish you'd write more with Harry and Ron and Harry and Hermione, though, since we got mostly Ron and Hermione in this chapter.

    Thank you for your review of one of my fics! I can't remember which one it was, but thank you. I'm so happy that my writing holds its own well against other fics out there.
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  • From newtothis on February 08, 2011
    i like ron to, and i could see some sex or at least somethink going on in that tent.
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  • From ANON - lauryl on August 23, 2010
    Oh man, in the beginning part, that had to be the funniest fart joke ever. I was laughing for like a minute!

    Good story, good smut. Cheers!
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  • From starstruck86 on April 21, 2010
    Leaving this here to say hello and thank you for the other reviews. I'm glad your friend is enjoying the stories!

    I have posted the next Feelin Good on LJ, called collecting broken hearts.

    My email is starstruckwriter1986[AT]googlemail[DOT]com -if you don't mind, can you send me an email so that when you reply and I want to reply I can just do that rather than spamming your reviews?

    I still adore this story by the way! Poor Ron and his aching guts!
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  • From SalonKitty on March 22, 2010
    I agree; there had to be some fooling around going on in that tent. Or rather, maybe there should have been so the trio wouldn't have been so miserable! I always found that part of the series a bit questionable in straining believability, but then I have to remind myself it was written for a young audience. Even still, it would have been cool if she'd gone Young Adult the whole series and allowed for more of the hormonal stuff.

    Nice job. Triosex is always made of win.
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  • From starstruck86 on March 22, 2010
    Oh, Ron's poor guts, poor love. Just wanted to heal him and put him to bed!

    But, also, by the end when all the farting and crapping was done, very, very sexy. I nearly fell off my seat laughing when Ron said that all Hermione's efforts had cleaned him out! Your care of Ron in this was actually very sweet, but also Harry.

    I'm glad that they're all loved up in the tent now ;) (And that the toilet is private).
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  • From Juana13 on March 21, 2010
    wonderful story!! very lovely. i felt bad that Harry felt left out and alone, but i'm glad that herms and ron comforted him and told him how they felt. yay for herm/harry/ron!!
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