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Reviews for Over Protective Mates

By : yamiyugi23
  • From ANON - Amu on August 03, 2013
    Three at once? That's a lot =)
    But just imagine little cat and dog like children...*.*

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  • From MalevolentRose87 on February 22, 2012
    Yay! Such yummy awesomeness xD
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  • From BleedingHearts on April 13, 2010
    Awww, this is really cute.
    FoxHarry is so adorable.
    I think you needed a beta for the last few chapters. The spelling wasn't too bad, but your grammar needs some work. And it could do with more detail and a little more plot (although that isn't necessary)
    Really good job though, very imaginative. I cant wait to read your future fics.
    xXx
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  • From sanda on April 13, 2010
    good chapter, cool ending
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  • From littlemissadams on April 13, 2010
    ya did good :) sorry to see it end :(
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  • From sanda on April 13, 2010
    good chapter
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  • From littlemissadams on April 12, 2010
    you really do enjoy tormenting us with cliffhangers...i look forward to the next (and last) chapter!
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  • From sanda on April 12, 2010
    good chapter
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  • From littlemissadams on April 11, 2010
    do you live to torment us with cliffhangers? i look forward to the next update!
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  • From LadyArtemis112 on April 10, 2010
    Hey! Will this story be mpreg? I'm just curious as they are my favorite kinds of stories. Anyway, nice chapter! :)
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  • From sanda on April 10, 2010
    good story
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  • From LordYouko on April 10, 2010
    Cute! I would definitely like to see more of this story...but I think sirius suits better as super seme, don't you? Anyway, foxy Harry is so cute!! Hope they have some lemony fun soon!!
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  • From BleedingHearts on April 10, 2010
    I love H/R/S fics ^^
    Your spelling is perfect, but there are a few grammar mistakes, nothing major though. And the chapters are a little short, but otherwise this is a really good fic.
    I cant wait to read the rest, so update soon please.
    xXx
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  • From littlemissadams on April 10, 2010
    i think i hate you for that ending (not really!) i look forward to the next post!
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  • From LadyArtemis112 on April 10, 2010
    I like your story! It is a good start and I am really interested in seeing how this turns out. Keep up the good work! :)
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