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Reviews for Caught in the Act

By : HexxKitten
  • From ANON - sally on November 21, 2012
    Great story
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  • From Bawetta on October 04, 2012
    Wonderful bit of naughty fantasy.
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  • From Mariana01 on January 19, 2011
    That was really good!!! Congratulations =]
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  • From StillHorny on November 11, 2010
    Very cheeky! I loved it.
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  • From Remarkable on July 09, 2010
    Me likey. Hot and smutty. Perfect end to my day. Insert me in Hermione's place and it really is perfect.
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  • From on July 06, 2010
    I could not stop reading. In fact, I had to read it aloud to a friend and once more for my own pleasure. Your description was vivid and delicious. I could smell Severus's presence as if I were Hermione. You did a brilliant job and should definitely keep doing what you're doing!
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  • From MIverson on June 27, 2010
    Wow, what a cool story.

    cosmyk
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  • From lovestruck on June 19, 2010
    I really liked this story. I always like a little voyerism/exhibitionism too... LOL. You should think about writing a multi-chapter story with HGSS. I think you are very creative.
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  • From Monsterchan on June 19, 2010
    Haha you had me going! Great story! Loved all of it
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  • From JanisJ on June 12, 2010
    Cute and hot fantasy cum to life.... nicely done :)
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  • From RogueMudblood on June 12, 2010
    What I liked:
    1) very hot PWP. Good flow, stayed with you all the way, and you didn't lose my interest.
    2) The twist was cute; expected (since you stuck it in the AR section) but cute.

    What I didn't like:
    This is a problem for me with most PWPs. I can rename the characters, and I get the same effect. I can make all the characters OCs, it doesn't matter. It's why I usually shy away from PWPs. Because I like a little substance. Yours being longer, I took a chance.

    I'm not saying he wasn't Severus Snape - he very much was. But he could also be Lucius Malfoy, Draco Malfoy, Dark!Harry, Dark!Ron (although the bit about the eyes would be harder with Harry or Ron)

    Overall, I really did like it - a sexy little piece I'll probably revisit in the future when I need quick stress relief.
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  • From circe266 on June 11, 2010
    Mmmm, yummy hotness. I like the way you write Severus as so 'clueless' that she is turned on by him. The ending is a nice way to remove the inherent squickiness of the professor/underage student dynamic.

    Nice job!
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