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  • From circe266 on November 16, 2010
    Hmmm, Neil said she had 3 mates ... is that Severus as well as Fenrir and Yorik?

    I am looking forward to the next chapter with Hermione & Fenrir. And I can't wait to read any sequel that includes her hooking up with Yorik and Severus (especially Yorik -- YUM!)


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  • From ANON - April on November 15, 2010
    Yay!!!!
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  • From ANON - colao on November 15, 2010
    still love it and look forward to the sequels!
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  • From StillHorny on November 15, 2010
    I love this story and every chapter as always. I will eagerly watch for the final chapters and the sequels.

    Your dialog is wonderful. I got all hot and bothered by Yorik's comments to Hermoine about his plans for her in the future *fanning the flush that was brought to my face*

    Also, Hermoine's sense of independance is and will only get her more spankings. But I suspect that she really does like them, subconsiously at least *wink, evil smirk*

    As always, more...PLEASE!!
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  • From sarahdaye9 on November 14, 2010
    I would really really like to beta this story for you! It is one of the best and most unique I have read in a long time.
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  • From bloodravyn on November 14, 2010
    finally! i was so worried she was gonna die!
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  • From ANON - Reb on November 08, 2010
    I miss the times you would update once a week ):
    Looking forward to chapter 15!
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  • From ANON - MJ on November 05, 2010
    Oh, I felt so bad for Hermione in the beginning. And then I felt bad for Fenrir. And then I was happy for them. What a lovely rollercoaster. Wonderful chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Dawn on November 04, 2010
    BTW You put me to shame...English is my first language, but your grammer is much better then mine!
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  • From ANON - Dawn on November 04, 2010
    Very good chapter! Can't wait for the next one! I'm hooked!
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  • From Citten on October 30, 2010
    Sorry that so many have bothered you, but that is just us i guess; we just get so wrapped up in the in the story that we want more! and like most all americans we wanted like yesterday or right now! ;) so maybe it will help to send so of those 'hurry up' reviews to your beta to let them see what you have to deal with maybe it will help with getting faster. :) maybe too you could send more than one chapter and when one is done they can send them back as soon as one is done. just some thaughts hope they help. :)
    Now i want to tell you that i loved the chapter! i cant wait to see what is next for our soulmated couple! i am also dying to if fenrir will tell hermione what he did and to maybe see his veiw, but if not i will just be happy with what comes next for i am dying to see what happens! so i cant wait to see our recovering couple is upto next! :) i do hope that it is soon!! hurry up AgainAndAgain's beta! ;)
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  • From circe266 on October 24, 2010
    What an emotional, gut-wrenching chapter. Poor Hermione. Poor Fenrir. (Poor all of them!)

    I'm so glad that they each had a breakthrough, Hermione in accepting the wolf in herself and her role in the pack, and Fenrir in caring for her feelings and not just her body. I look forward to your next chapter! (I hope that Yorik is OK!)
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  • From StillHorny on October 24, 2010
    I will wait with bated breath, forever if necessary, for each chapter. We only want them faster, because we devour them. Much like Fenrir wants to devour Hermoine...all in a good way.

    I was nearly in tears during most of this chapter. My heart leapt in my chest when she screamed his name.

    And although I love the smut, I must admit, that just kissing for over an hour and a half...sure sounded good to me.

    As alway, your humble reader awaits the next chapter to be beta'd.
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  • From Remarkable on October 24, 2010
    Wow, I really enjoyed the last couple of chapters. You had me worried! If you need a native english speaker to look over your chapters I'd be happy to make corrections for you. Even with your current beta there are still a lot of basic mistakes. I'm not perfect with commas, but I am very good with sentence structure, spelling and paragraph presentation. Email me at ladydagger27@yahoo.com if you need some help.

    I was scared for awhile there! I thought Hermione wasn't going to embrace her inner wolf. I also thought that you were going to say Fenrir had killed Rorik, so that's good he's still alive. Poor Neville and Draco! They were so scared! And I'd like to see Severus get his hands on Hermione at some point too, as that is my favorite pairing anyway. Just glad her and Fenrir are together and happy now!
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  • From purpleann on October 24, 2010
    Wow, that was fantastic! You honestly had me worried for a little there...I love how Neville and Draco were there to comfort her and were worried. I love this story and I can't wait to read what comes next! Let me know if you need help with beta-ing, I'd be happy to help.
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