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By : TheDarkLadyVoldemort666
  • From wolfcathope on August 22, 2010
    I love this story but are they being fair, all of them? I can understand the point of Harry having to work to become an equal, but he didn't say they could defend them selves against his family if they attacked. How can they just expect him to put everything he witness and learned? yes he did have a awake up call but that would just enforce that he would want to bacome someone elses pawn.
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  • From WolfPup5683 on August 20, 2010
    This is a really good story so far, I hope you continue it soon.
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  • From hellangelhellina on August 17, 2010
    This story makes me crazy...er. I swer I get to excited over it.
    Some times I want to skip parts just to get to read what I what to know but I get so worried that I'll mix something wich ends up being true. Then as soon as I start a chapter I'll want to read the next chapter. And the fact that yourr chapters are so long mack me adore the story and you write really well.
    This story is just all around awsome.
    The acule story keeps me into it and ecited.I feel my heart raceing most times trying to figer out whats going to happen next. This sory is great so update soon.
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  • From mrequecky on August 16, 2010
    I loved the chap before this one, but I really didn't like this one at all... The language threw me off. It is weird for me that you make the dark side the good side but at the same time let Harry call Hermione a mudblood several times. I just can't see a good Harry being a racist at all, even if Hermione is very dark in this story. It is one thing to know that there is a difference in blood, but another to still think one is better... I hope the language and bashing of the trio is not gonna be the focus of the next chapters.
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  • From hellangelhellina on August 09, 2010
    love this story. i hope harry dosn't do anythimg stupid. can't wait to see the prank. updat soon.
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  • From Chocho on August 08, 2010
    hm. well. they say harry isn't ready to be told but it seems to me that the longer they go without telling harry, the more jealous and possessive he becomes of lucius. so in the end they're hurting him and condemning him instead of helping him, which is pretty much the same thing dumbledore used to do. keeping things from him because he wasn't ready, he wasn't old enough. trying to protect him "for his own good" will only turn out disastorous in the end. it always does.
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  • From Chocho on August 06, 2010
    i love how the manipulative dumbledore aspect works in this story. great story, but most of this chapter is one giant paragraph. makes it hard to read.
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  • From RoxanneTheWeretiger on July 29, 2010
    How can you leave it there? I need more i tell you, more. At first I was kinda meh, read it before. But the more I read the more I liked it. It's not like the other fics with tom and malfoy as mates. Good job.
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  • From POOHBEAR74 on July 27, 2010
    I HOPE THE HOUSE IS NICE AND YOU GET WHAT YOU NEED FOR IT.

    THIS IS THE GREATEST STORY EVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
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  • From MyaMalfoy on July 27, 2010
    AH!!! This is such a good story! I know how real life can be, but please update as soon as you can! I REALLY need to see what will happen with Harry and coming to terms with who his White Wolf and Silver Snake are! And, of course, what happens after he gets over whatever snit he'll most likely go into. hehehe
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  • From Dr4g0nQu33n on July 26, 2010
    Yay now Harry knows!
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  • From cocoke5 on July 26, 2010
    i love the story and can not wait for you to update the next chapter of the story i cry at some chapter and laught at of chapters that you have up right now. what will harrydo now that he here droce and sal talking about his mates. can not wiat for more of the story. it is so good.

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  • From GovernmentCheese on July 19, 2010
    Hi there,

    I'm new here, but when I read this story, I wanted to comment on your note at the top of the page. I applaud you for having the courage to express your feelings in such a constructive (and beautifully written) way. I too have been there in my lifetime and the people who say rude things to you about such a sensitive subject can go suck an egg. Personally, I think the three of you; (I believe this is co-written by TheDarkLadyVoldemort666, Shay92 and God of Mercy), are doing a brilliant job. Keep up the good work!

    Leafy_Sea_Dragon
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  • From mrssnaperiddle on July 17, 2010
    I have been enjoying this story so far but there is only one thing that I have an issue with. Spelling and Grammar; you have things spelt incorrectly (and I'm talking universally incorrect not the difference between countries because I am use to that now). I am talking about things like "Now Marvolo, your going to ware a hole in the floor..." from Chapter 8 which should, in fact, be written "Now Marvolo, you are going to wear a hole in the floor..." and also an instance in an earlier chapter where you say "blood trader" instead of "blood traitor". A trader is a person who trades things, a traitor is someone who betrays their country, a person, family, etc. There are also instances where you switch from past to present tense (though it has only happened a couple of times) which ruins the flow of the story. You have a good thing going as far as the story goes so I suggest sorting out those few things to make it even better. Perhaps ensure that you have a beta to read over everything and make sure that they are good with spelling and grammar and so forth as well, or they're not much of a help.
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  • From angelicangel on July 15, 2010
    I love this story.Keep it up:)
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