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Reviews for Suri Marlowe and the Chamber of Secrets

By : Starspear
  • From ANON - penghost on August 15, 2012
    A good starter.
    A new face at Hogwarts at the start of 2. year!
    Thats interesting.
    Someone with a bat history aswell.
    I think it could go well. Whit some smut added(with all them horny teenagers there is bound to be)
    it could even be a thrilling story.
    I hope you're muse let you goon for more than a dozen chapters.
    It can go twisty!
    The more the better.
    It should loosely follow the main line of canon and hopefully let HHR come true in some ways.
    No real need for Horcruxes, you could come up with an alternative ?

    I hope to see you soon.

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  • From RogueMudblood on February 22, 2012

    Since you admit in your AN at the bottom of the chapter that this is rough, I won't bother with technical commentary.

    I am curious as to your OCs. Suri's starting off a bit like a more sequestered version of young Tom. I'd also be very interested to see more about her parents, especially in light of Dumbledore's reaction regarding her father. You've stated that both of them were magical; yet Suri is in a muggle facility. I'm quite curious as to how that came about.

    I think you have a very interesting beginning. I'd like to see where it goes.

    Happy writing!
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