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Reviews for Breaking Forwards

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  • From ANON - Pianita on January 13, 2011
    Wow, great story! the intricasies i am seating at the egde of my seat wondering how you are going to bring the events to an end...I totally love Severus, the poor guy is trully a life saver. But all your characters are greatly presented, with fears and confusion. Can you find it in your mind to get Albus and Minerva a lesson in observation. Something that they will never forget.
    Please keep writing!
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  • From Wyrdsmith on January 07, 2011
    Incredible writing and utterly engrossing story. Please continue! If you have an update notification list, will you please
    add me to it? cvmail11@yahoo.com. Thanks!
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  • From jujukitty on November 05, 2010
    omg WOW! just started reading this today and wow, amazing. harsh and dark without being depressing but still bringing in the little bits of humor that life provides. amazing job with this, keep up the great work, i'm looking forward to the next chapter
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  • From Kayrox133 on November 05, 2010
    Ron is such a bastard but shame on his mom for pointing out to him, probably numerous times, how much HE, not his parents, owe Uncle Rodney!
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  • From HeartStar on October 23, 2010
    Oh wow poor colin! poor harry and genny and dennis too I have to see where you take this please when you can update thank you.
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  • From Kayrox133 on October 22, 2010
    Poor Hermione. This news will be devastating to her. I hope Ginny talks to Snape. I am so glad Dennis is with Harry and I hope someone discovers Colin soon!
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  • From macropixi on October 20, 2010
    wasn't expecting to like this as much as I do. I usually hate Ron!Monster stories... this is really good.
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  • From danawarner on October 19, 2010
    How about some veritaserum to good old Percy AND especially RON? They seem to be using it on others to verify the truth, how about the one in Gryffindor house that started the vitriol against Harry to begin with?
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  • From Kayrox133 on October 19, 2010
    Another great chapter even though I must admit that I am ready for Dennis and Colin to go out in the world again. Hasn't anyone noticed they can't get in the ROR? Harry needs to help search for them so they can get out. Hermione has to be messed up to still be in St Mungo's. Is there a way to trace the magical signature? You can tell that I have a lot of questions because you are leaving me wanting the next chapter and the next. :)
    Looking forward to see what you have planned next.
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  • From sanda on September 27, 2010
    good chapter
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  • From ANON - Toni on September 26, 2010
    I hope you update soon - this is an intriguing variation and well done so far. Hope you are still working on it.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on September 26, 2010
    Oh wow. Colin's situation is just... no words.
    Good chapter! Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Christopher on September 25, 2010
    Story adheres too much to the BS put out about pedosexuality. That rates it down a LOT in my opinion.
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  • From ANON - Layla on September 06, 2010
    I am truly ashamed of Ron and I do hope that he will get it in the end.(Pun and all) I hope that Severus and the rest of his house will stand behind Harry and show Harry what a true family is. I think that Dumbledore really needs to open his eyes to what is really going on around him. It is a shame that Remus had to prove to Dumbledore that Severus was right all along. I wish that Hermione does recover from her injuries, but I do worry about Colin and why no one has even try to search for him or his brother. What is that school coming to? Please continue for I would like to see what will happen next. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Kayt on September 05, 2010
    i am literally dying to know what happens next. i never read WIPs but i'm SO happy i decided to try yours. i'm not even going to worry about guessing what happens next. i'd rather just wait for you to update. i love everything about this story, except the hermione situation. i'm kind of wondering if she and harry will ever reconcile, since they are both victims and both deserve each other's friendships considering the people they relied on have failed them both. but either way, cant wait to see what happens!
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