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Reviews for She came hard. Trust me.

By : Tenshinhan
  • From JayDee on January 07, 2011
    Quality satire, right there. Good job, Sir and or Ma'am. Good Job.
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  • From janasi83 on January 07, 2011
    BTW, I love how you're parodying the conventions of the majority of fics out there. Hermione ALWAYS comes hard, in fact she always comes simultaneously with her partner or at least they both always come (now how often does that really happen?). She ALWAYS takes of her clothes, revealing her undies, her breasts ALWAYS spill over her bra/top, she ALWAYS feels sensuous when taking a shower. LOL your fic really is a hoot to read. Will you maybe pick it up again? Pretty please?? ;)
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  • From janasi83 on January 07, 2011
    Brilliant!!! I love it! I've just been thinking that we need more postmodernist approaches to the stories, something to point to the fact that it's all fiction. What you've done reminds me a bit of The French Lieutenant's Woman. If I ever do get around to writing a fic, I'll definitely do a piece like that, too.

    Can't wait to see where your witty mind takes us next!
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  • From ANON - ally on August 16, 2010
    HAHAHAHAHA
    that was the funniest piece of erotica ive ever read :P
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  • From ANON - JB on August 07, 2010
    I dont hate it because its not sexual, I hate it because its crap...
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  • From luna4917 on August 07, 2010
    This is seriously strange, but I can't say I dislike it - despite your prediction. I am curious though, is there an actual point to this or just some random thoughts on the page....Also is she really alone on the roof? I'll be interested to see what's next.
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