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Reviews for The Doll House

By : soldiersgirl0709
  • From serinblackmoon on September 03, 2010
    Great chappie! I love seeing love blossom. I can't wait to see how you traumatize them next! *evil laugh*

    Lady Serin
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  • From ANON - Smurphy on September 03, 2010
    Aaahhhh they are falling in love!!!! How sweet!!!! Loved the romp on the stairs and I love human you have written Draco!!! It was soooo funny when hermione was talking about luci that was sooo funny!!!! Great chap
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  • From KellyJCR on September 02, 2010
    SO a little trip into the thoughts of Draco. Interesting how the house is so similiar to the Malfoys. The bantering is working as a wonderful aphrodisiac. Sex on the stairs was very creative and are we going to find out who the other muggleborn was? I'm sure its not important to the story. I just like to see where authors take their characters outside the plots. I feel awful for Polly . It seems to me she may be the saddest spirit in the house. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!
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  • From lemonade8 on September 01, 2010
    I like how the two interact in this story. I'm also wondering how the children can be saved.

    This sort of reminds me a bit of The Haunting with Liam Neeson etc... amazingly beautiful house, trapped children. Evil antagonist.
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  • From becka8199 on September 01, 2010
    I am completely enthralled in this story! I cannot wait for an update. It's so well written that I can actually feel their dread, and the fear. The sinister spirit in the house can certainly be felt through the words. Great Work!
    Anxiously Awaiting Update!
    :) B.
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 01, 2010
    Beautiful!

    Teasing Draco with lustful thoughts of his father was the perfect touch. :)
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on September 01, 2010
    Aww, that was sweet and tender and lovely. Even the end, with the two ghosts watching, was eerie, but sweet. Well done! Thank you! I look forward to more soon. Off on my trip, so I will write when I get back. :-) TTFN, HG4eva
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  • From Gertie on September 01, 2010
    I think sex like that would be worth a few scraped up knees and maybe a lump on the head. Fantastic so far. I am so excited to see how they free the girls and whether or not Draco just burns the damned house to the ground and starts fresh. Keep posting my dear girl, and I will continue to sing your praises.
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  • From ANON - AngelBaby on August 29, 2010
    CH 8: Lovely, yummy, delicious Draco. Hermione is very naughty, heehee.
    Ch 9: Ahh too scary and yucky for me. Your going to have to write me one of your funny Severus stories after having to read this. I'm determined to get through this and give you feedback though. Am listening to Uncle Kracker's "Smile" while I read so i'm not so scarred. LOL.
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  • From ANON - Aundree'a on August 29, 2010
    My goodness. It keeps getting better and better, but also more creepy. I can only imagine having to deal with someone as crazy as Doll!! As always, you have me floored, and I get excited everytime I see an update! Can't wait for the next update!!
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  • From ANON - BlackCat_7 on August 28, 2010
    I really like your story. I love that it isn
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  • From KellyJCR on August 28, 2010
    You were not kidding with that warning. The character you created is a sick and twisted soul. You really have combined the Black magic, Wicca and magical elements perfectly. Plus you have explained the way they inter-relate very well. I love the response Hermione gave to Draco about why he should enter first. (I wish I had the cajones to say stuff like that.) There was some foreshadowing in there if I'm correct, "e be stronger than he fink e is" hit me as particularly poignant. Can't wait for more. Well done!!!
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  • From ANON - Smurphy on August 28, 2010
    Wow so we got some more detail into doll's madness... He was really sick but very smart... Like knowng that if the aurors got there first they would know what to do with him.... I knew the cellar was going to be interesting... Wow do we know why he killed hisself???? Great chap SG and very creepy:-))
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on August 28, 2010
    I sure hope they succeed, too! This chapter was chocked full of information I never needed to know. lol I'm with Draco on all this. Burn it down and start over! But, I do get Hermione's point about freeing the children, even if I don't want to get it. ;-) I love the way you throw the romance and desire in there at the same time. That, my dear, is quite a skill! Thanks and I look forward to more soon! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - wishyouwere on August 27, 2010
    I am glad that you are back, and aside from the dark tone of this tale, really enjoying the story. This has become my favourite couple in the fandom. If I say pretty please, is there any chance of another chapter this weekend? Pretty please???
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