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Reviews for Harem of the Ancient House of Potter

By : SSJ04Mewtwo
  • From ANON - ray on September 22, 2012
    Excellant story. I enjoyed at fanfiction and have enjoyed it here. DO you know how many more chapters there will be?
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  • From ANON - Jackleoncole on September 17, 2012
    Man you are great!!! Thanks for the great stories and thank you to your Beta's as well
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  • From ANON - neogoblin on August 10, 2012
    hope you update soon cant wait to see what happent to old tommy boy.
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  • From Morbid_and_Sexy on April 22, 2012
    wow. ch. 56 is awesome. Is there going to be more?
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  • From ANON - Kleiner Stern on April 02, 2012
    "Sie wird unterbrochen" means "She is interrupted" not "You will be broken"
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  • From DSTorres on March 14, 2012
    Nice. Hope to read about Harry making a Anastasia's dreams come true.
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  • From ANON - Dodelike on March 03, 2012
    I rarely come to adultfanfiction.net, and when I do it's usually to ready Buffy fics. But I am enjoying your story.
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  • From ANON - WhiteWolven on January 29, 2012
    First off I just wanted to say that I am highly impressed with the imaginative, and very well done story line that you have produced in this. As a big fan of Harry Potter and many of the off shoots that others have wrote in what they believe should have happened in the book or in this case their own twist to the story and re-creation of it. The story has a lot of imagination and everything integrates together with remarkable flow. I have been reading this for a couple weeks now but decided to not review it until I saw more of it develop. Seeing more than enough now I have finally felt that I should make a review. Very wonderfully done, very well done indeed, I hope you will continue writing this one to the very end. I will however to see the end of this writing because it is so well done. Unlike many other potter writings this one captivates my attention and won't let go. Every time I read it I just can't seem to stop and that has rarely happens. To be completely honest I have this page bookmarked and its placed as one of my homepages that pops up first in my browser. Keep writing my friend keep writing, you have a marvelous piece of work here and I hold my breath in anticipation of every next chapter that you post.
    By the way do you want any comments if we see any grammatical errors, spelling and stuff like that? or repeats of things that appear? Didn't know how you would react so I didn't put down any that I saw, some people don't take constructive criticism too well sometimes.
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  • From ANON - Thanatos on January 21, 2012
    Still reading, great story. Looking forward to the rest. Hopefully not to far in the future.
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  • From ANON - SexyLizard on January 21, 2012
    Its nice to see that is story is alive.
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  • From layne378 on January 18, 2012
    Thanks for the new chapter... love this story. Thanks for all your hard work, it was worth the wait :-)
    your fan,
    Layne
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  • From ANON - kim on January 18, 2012
    I have been reading this story for quite awhile and I love it. Some concrit though... I would love to see more detail in conversations and dialog, to have smooth transitions between the scenes. I've been quite lost for the last 2ish chapters because information comes flying out of nowhere. Besides that slight problem I love this! It's a great idea for a plot and I always loved a badass Harry. haha
    Happy writing!
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  • From ANON - Sharae on January 18, 2012
    Still reading and enjoying.
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  • From bloodshound on January 18, 2012
    yep, still reading and happy you have taken your time with this, due to my lap top crashing and being forced to using an old clunker that was an exercise in frustration. It's so nice to be able to answer and not have to wonder if my compy is going to crash on me before i get a chance to finisdh my review.
    wow, tom jr realllllllly has no chance of winning this trial. :/
    despite his horrendous childhood.
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  • From ANON - GBTtown on January 13, 2012
    I like the story for the most part. Too funny to rate being a serious stroke story, but a fun read still. I am not sure if you were aiming for writing an adventure/parody filled with smut for the sake of smut or if you were actually trying to create a good adventure/romance/sex story. For the most part you have succeeded in writing a good readable story, but there are parts that irk me.
    Fixing Harry's little horcrux problem was anticlimactic. They screw it goes away. No howling soul being destroyed, no sign that it was actually ever there. The dialogue you have written for Voldie; a lot of times it makes him sound like a geeky teenager! Example: "Ooooh, if I had the time and resources I'd go and destroy Nurmengard right now!" What evil dark lord says, "Ooooh"? Most of the times in just the thinness of the plot and dialogue that bug me. Lord Edgecombe finds his daughter doing the nasty with a junior Death Nibbler and you leave it at, "Marietta, we need to...what the hell!"? No hexes thrown, no asses kicked?
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