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Reviews for Magic Books

By : JamesSMI
  • From ANON - Anon on September 09, 2014
    Im sorry, but MOANING MYRTLE! MYRTLE! If you didn't know how to spell it, why bot google it instead of spelling it 10 different ways in one paragraph! ? I mean honestly, its just ruined what could have been an interesting story.
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  • From BlessedJinx on March 31, 2011
    you may wish to proof-read your spelling and it's Moaning Myrtle
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  • From MacPhisto on January 18, 2011
    wow, your story sucks
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  • From AirPirate on January 07, 2011
    This is a pretty good first story :)

    I'd like to see her let Ginny or Luna in on her secret
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  • From DaPhoenix on November 25, 2010
    Great start, can't wait for more.
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  • From jimeme89 on November 25, 2010
    Utterly fantastic and quite hot. Would love for you to continue and mix another girl in it.
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  • From KyoIchigaki on November 06, 2010
    Interesting set-up. I like the story, but you'll need some more work to really wow people. I'd start with spelling and grammar.

    I'd also be careful with logic play. Some literary liscense is expected here of course, but if you use too much you should move the story to AU/AR. As it stands, Hermione cannot be Head Girl...she didn't attend her 7th year in Hogwarts, at least not in the canon.
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  • From celtickiss on November 03, 2010
    Wow, this was so hot and I'm so wet right now. I definitely hope you'll be updating soon.
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