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By : grugster
  • From Melissa on April 03, 2022

    Hola! encontre esta historia y quede enganchando. Gracias! Hasta la próxima actualización. 😉 


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  • From ANON - Tiffany on May 22, 2016
    More please? Excellent story very well written and super hot
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  • From ANON - Katherine on April 03, 2016
    I really hope you've not abandoned this story. Ive really enjoyed reading it and have reread it when you've added new chapters. Please update it.
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  • From ANON - Tiffany Northam on March 23, 2016
    More please?
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  • From ANON - Atallfungi on March 12, 2016
    I've been reading your story, just submit 2, and I was just wondering when the next chapter is gonna come out? I really love the story and if you need someone new to help you edit before you post your stories online, I would love o be your "beta", so please keep writing just submit 2.
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  • From Luthistar on October 16, 2015
    Great story! !, I hope you can update soon!!,
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  • From ANON - Kate~ on August 25, 2015
    I think Fenrir was far too lenient with Draco for tearing Hermione. She did tell Draco it was too much at least twice. I hope there's going to be something in the next chapter, if there is a next chapter, that makes sure Draco truly learns his much needed lesson. Fenrir's an idiot for letting Draco manipulate him.
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  • From ANON - Kate~ on August 18, 2015
    I do hope you end up coming back to this story. It's one of my favourites on here and I keep on coming back to read it over and over again. :)
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  • From ANON - Miss987789 on July 28, 2015
    Well... In the end I think Tara is useful though as a friend to Hermione and as a source of information and the packs would be unbalanced if she was lost but there are large parts of Tara that I do dislike. For example, her arrogance and her possessiveness over Janto. Janto is one of Hermione's closest mates and Tara needs to be knocked down a few pegs. (this is a continuation of my first review now that I have thought about it more)
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  • From ANON - Miss987789 on July 28, 2015
    I really love this story to the point where I keep on reading it over and over again. I disagree with the other reviewers, your version of Hermione is great. It's a pity you appear to have stopped updating your story.
    The one thing that I've noticed is that, no matter how many times I re-read this, I really dislike Tara to the point of constantly wishing that something will happen that will make her as unappealing as possible to all the dominants in the story. She's just so... annoying and she kinda disgusts me.
    But she's important in the story because you really do need one character that you hate in any story otherwise it becomes boring so well done.
    To end on a positive note, I will say that I do think that your story is really well written. And sorry for using 'I' so much in this review.
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  • From ANON - marisa on December 01, 2014
    Hey,
    I really love this story. So sad that you stoped working on it :( Would just love for you to continue! I so want to know whats up with hermiones sire and that knew woman...
    Marisa
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  • From ANON - vladsegundo on November 24, 2014
    oh this is perfection right here
    i finished both sets in 24 hours
    its not easy to get me glued to my screen like that
    so kudos to you for that
    i look forward to seeing more
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 23, 2014
    Just read this story again for the who knows how many times. I simply love it. You've created such a great story with awesome characters. Thank you!!
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  • From ANON - ladydeath089 on August 06, 2014
    I just reread just submit and just submit 2 it is such a great story :) Great job on writing it. Can't wait to see what fun Fenrir and Draco has now that the punishment is over. Please update as soon as you can. Can't wait till the next chapter, keep up the good work :)
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on March 24, 2014
    (Just FYI, I was formerly Mark's Pet) I had recently started to re-read your stories, because they are WONDERFUL. I was so excited that you had posted new chapters, I almost ran ahead to read the new ones. But I got myself under control *really hard for a submissive, like myself* and am glad that I waited. I like the chapter with Draco and Darius. I can't wait to see how that sub-plot plays out. I was shocked (pleasantly so) by the threesome and double vaginal penetration with the three subs. I was please that Hermione's mates realized that the injury was an accident and have not forbidden the three to play in the future. I can't wait for more chapters. And just FYI, I have no intention to stop reading this story. My only sadness is that you will not write anymore after this story is complete. So I am torn between wanting new chapters and not wanting the story to end. So, I will ask for what I always ask for...More, Please!!!!
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