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Reviews for Secunda Fortuna

By : angelwarrior1
  • From gravybaby on January 31, 2011
    MORE PLEASE! I like the way you initiated the pregnancy. Hope to see an update soon!
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  • From KageKitsune on January 27, 2011
    really like the story and I hope you update it soon!
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  • From ANON - Kurama'srose124 on January 26, 2011
    ... (Hearts) I'm in love. Like seriously! Please update soon? I'm begging you :D
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  • From keraizaki on January 15, 2011
    Whoop! I'm so glad you updated! And I really like the fact that you're giving Tom another chance ^^ I always wondered what he would be like if, like you said, he grew up in a lovig family. Mabye you could write a sequel about Tom growing up and them as a family? I would really love that ^^ But that's for another moment, ne? And you can bounce you're Ideas off of me if you want :3 I just don't think I can be a Proper Beta, at least for this story, beacuse I don't really know much about Batman :/ If you want some on to chat with, though, I'd love to do that ^^ My e-mail is keraizaki@yahoo.com :3

    Also, if you wanna get more Reviews though, you should reply to them. ^^ And if you don't want to take up space on your Chapter Pages, then got to the sites forum and mae and account. You can't post the replys there, and then just put a link at the top of each chapter ;D That what this person did for this story (http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600025626&chapter=27) So if you have any questions just ask her :3

    Write more soon please!
    Thanks,
    ~Kera
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  • From ANON - chibifae on January 13, 2011
    This is an interesting crossover. I don't think a read a Mpreg quite like this one before. I'm looking forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - orkchild on January 12, 2011
    Here is some suggestions 1.as to how often once a week usually keeps the mob with torches and pitchforks from your door. More often is always nice.
    2. I find writing an outline helps me keep my story from wandering off and me from forgetting pieces of important information. It can be as little as just chapter headings and and where you want the story to be at the of the chapter and any important facts you need to include. To very detailed as to exactly which characters you want in each chapter and exactly what situation they will be dealing with. That way when you flesh it out you have a bit of a map or a GPS telling exactly where to go. 3. A couple of suggestions for writers block. If it is due to the situation the characters are in and you can't figure out what they should do try putting yourself in their place or a favorite character from another story in the situation and see how they would deal with it. Or if it is a real life situation blocking your muse, try looking at it from your favorite character's point of view and it might give you a better perspective. 4. Lastly look for a good beta as they can serve as an editor and spring board for your writing.
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  • From ANON - emeraldavatar on January 12, 2011
    Hey,

    So, I would be willing to beta your story for Harry Potter continuity. I love what I've read so far and want to help you continue.
    I've been reading HP fanfiction for 8 years, but I've never been a beta.

    Just let me know!

    -Steph
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  • From ANON - Angel_R on January 12, 2011
    Love the story...plz continue.. cant wait to read more...
    (___/)
    (='.'=)
    (")_(")
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  • From ANON - spaz666 on January 12, 2011
    I'm so glad to see this story continue! I really like your unique way of having an mpreg, it adds the tension of not being in a relationship and having tom riddle as a son. Please keep going, it sounds soo interesting!!

    I can't wait until you add Bruce into the mix...=]
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  • From danawarner on January 12, 2011
    Interesting start
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  • From hellangelhellina on January 12, 2011
    i like this story. the idea of harry rasing the once dark lord is very interesting. i wish i could help you with the bata thing but i never watched the moives just the show. but i hope it works out cuz i think it's a good story sofar.
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  • From Tesgura on January 12, 2011
    Interesting route so far, I enjoyed seeing Harry as Harleen. Is he going to stay as HYarleen for the duration of the pregnancy or wait until he's so far along he can't hide it? I'm really looking forward to more!

    If you still need a beta my email is Donna beth 89 @ hotmail . com (minus the spaces of course) and I'd be happy to help.
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  • From chris7100 on January 12, 2011
    PS - Suggest you have a look at "Blessings from Malice" and "Guardian Angel" by Sarhea over at the Hermione Big Bang archive ( http://www.hermione.magical-worlds.us/ ). While they're Hermione/Bruce stories, they're remarkably well written and really capture the blend of worlds needed for a good crossover.
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  • From chris7100 on January 12, 2011
    This story has real potential. Hope you'll continue. I can offer some partial beta services (RL is a bitch at the moment, so I hesitate to step up for the whole job). Shoot me an email at betafiles at verizon dot net and let's chat.
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  • From ANON - Roguelle on January 01, 2011
    Oh, I've never seen a Batman/HP crossover! But you write really well and I'm intrigued already...I'll be checking back daily for you. x
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