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Reviews for You'll Have to Catch Me First

By : Kooldragon400
  • From onecelestialbeing on July 08, 2012
    oh damn that was amazing
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  • From meltin2me on September 19, 2011
    Very hot!! Needs a follow up. They have to catch her again. OR maybe she can catch them ;) I'd love to see them both at her mercy.
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  • From ANON - Lau on June 13, 2011
    hahaha loved the ending, loved the whole lil story!
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  • From Lizski on April 26, 2011
    Heehee. Loved it! :-D
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  • From ANON - Heather on April 02, 2011
    Yum, I liked that! There really aren't enough well-written threesome fics. Thanks. :)
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  • From HexxKitten on March 02, 2011
    Did someone turn the heating up? **fans self** great fic featuring my two favourite wizards.. Who wouldn't want to be the filling in that sandwich?

    Just one crit of this story... I need more! ;)
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  • From ANON - Hydrogenium on February 01, 2011
    Great work, thx for starting my day in such a "warming" way^^
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  • From shadowchsr on January 27, 2011
    Well, that was a wonderfully steamy and enjoyable read. Severus and Lucius are certainly my two favorite characters to see Hermione with and when you put the two of them together, it's just no contest. Add what you did to the story and it was just a sensual adventure. And with the way you ended it, it almost sounds like an opening for additional one-shot chapters if you are ever so inspired. I can just see all three of them scheming and giving chase and catching her again. Yes, that's this reader's not so subtle way of hopefully getting you to at least considering a continuance with this. It just seems like a fun idea to play with in between longer stories if you ever need a break. I just wanted to say though that I enjoyed the read and will probably be checking out your other Hermione and Lucius fic next. Take care.

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  • From LaBibliographe on January 23, 2011

    Chapter 1: This was indisputably smoking hot. It
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 19, 2011

    Please correct your disclaimer


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  • From dragongirl on January 12, 2011
    Funny, sexy, amazing.......... Could we have more?
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  • From HarryGinny4eva on January 11, 2011
    Is it hot in here? No, that's just your story! :-) Thank for giving me REALLY sweet dreams tonight. mmmm Nighty night! HG4eva
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  • From ANON - Dawn on January 11, 2011
    Oh. My. Gods.

    That was near perfection! You most deliciously caught one of my best fantasies and brought it to life... and left the door W I D E open for more... if only in my own twisted mind! ^_^ Bravo, darlin' bravo. That was wonderful. THANKS!
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  • From circe266 on January 11, 2011
    Mmm, what a lovely, hot little threesome fic. I love these three characters together, and you captured their dynamic quite nicely. I only wish that there were more!
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  • From StillHorny on January 10, 2011
    Oh, I just love Hermoine and the two sexiest 'dark' wizards!!!

    It was wonderful and I hope to read more. You could even make this oneshot into a few more chapters. The 'chase' should be fun and I am sure Hermoine wouldn't mind being caught *I know, I wouldn't*!?!?!?!
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