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Reviews for Why I Submit

By : griffonsperch
  • From Krucksue on July 02, 2012
    I definitely enjoy reading the story. Please continue. I'd like to see Sev "punish" Draco and Harry at the same time because Draco is too lenient.
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  • From ANON - britbrit on June 22, 2012
    i really like your story,
    i love sub harry!
    keep it coming
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  • From bloodshound on June 19, 2012
    i think it flows pretty smoothly and spanking is pretty generic for a D/s relationship. They're all still figuring out how to make this work so experimentation and mess ups are going to happen.
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  • From bloodshound on June 17, 2012
    that's how a relationship should be, especially one with D/s elements.
    Dom's are supposed to push a sub, to help him/her grow but they're also supposed to protect a sub. To be safe shelter for their sub.
    The trio's relationship doesn't seems strictly D/s but if it works for them, who cares. As long as they're all getting what they need out of it. Experimentation and finding each others hot spots, triggers and lines that can't be crossed is all part of it and they sound like their having fun. It's a pity har's friends aren't understanding but Meh to them. Hopefully Sev and Draco make up for that a little.
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  • From SoulMore on June 09, 2012
    FAN!~
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  • From ladylizzy on October 20, 2011
    I LOVE this story. I eagerly await what you want to share with us next I'm writing this review as chapter 6 is done. A flashback to how he wound up putting his trust in Draco and Severus would be nice eventually.

    I like your interpretation of how Harry's abuse form the Dursleys, everyone's insistence he had to go back each year, and people who supposedly cared for him pulling away from him affected him. Ron is really not much of a friend, how many times did he abandon Harry? It would be nice if at least a couple of his friends like Luna and Dean could accept his new lifestyle.

    You really got me ramped up on this story lol, I usually don't have so much to say in a review lol.
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  • From ANON - Louise on August 30, 2011
    I just found Reluctaant Slut via a links from a rec page and then found Why I Submit. I really enjoyed both of these stories. D/s is a kink that I enjoy reading. I hope you will post more in these stories in the future or maybe something else. Thank you
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  • From Orkchild on April 12, 2011
    Okay, we will feed the muse but I'm all out of Purina muse chow so what does your muse like? All right wonderful installment I can hardly wait for more.
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  • From bloodshound on April 12, 2011
    thats pretty ambitious, 2 chaps a week. Don't beat yourself up is you don't manage it neh?
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  • From bloodshound on April 08, 2011
    i hope the punishment wasn't to harsh... he's just settling into it after all and that role play was pretty mind blowing
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  • From obsessed72 on April 08, 2011
    that was fantastic, more please
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  • From ladynightvamp on February 09, 2011
    ok I was spoiled you were updating every 3 days, what happen?? I want my smut thank you!!

    LOL LOL LOL LOL

    Love the story BTW
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  • From ANON - Hambares on January 22, 2011
    Can't wait for more
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  • From ObsesiveReader on January 22, 2011
    Love the addition can't wait to see more. Will Draco and Severus find out about Harry's past with the Durselys?
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 22, 2011
    I like the contract, but the last chapter before it it seems like Snape and Malfoy are getting so... pampering with Harry. like, there isn't much to their actual D/s relationship other than harry bottoms. I hope you can assert the D's into their roles a little more, I'm just feeling a little bored perhaps?

    Other than that the lemon has all been quite yummy, and like i said I like the contract. I think it was a good idea to look up BDSM contract examples
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