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Reviews for The Plague

By : QueenRuby
  • From ANON - Alura on May 27, 2011
    I absolutely love this story! Will you be updating/finishing in the future?

    I think you have an amazing chance of becoming a published writer (if you haven't already). Your work is truly amazing.

    Best,
    Alura
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  • From ANON - Mekom on May 05, 2011
    I am liking your story so far. I don't know what a "triad" story is, so I can't give you my opinion on it. I do think that your characters are pretty OOC, but they are still fun to read about. It would really help the story if you could get a beta, because it can be difficult to understand some of the writing. I am curious about what exactly Dumbledore was doing to Hermione and why. I can't wait to see where this story takes you. I hope you get a chance to update soon!
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  • From ANON - Moi on April 28, 2011
    Great story so far. I particularly liked that bit about Molly Weasley. Does the death of Molly's brothers Gideon and Fabian Prewett (wasn't Dolohov accused of some of that?) have anything to do with the state Molly is in for at least ... 30 years? So Ginny died, but her brothers didn't even fall ill. Molly's fine too, though that could have something to do with possible restrictions (spells, curses, seals) placed on her. How about Andromeda and Tonks? They are sister/niece to Bellatrix and Narcissa after all. It cannot be solely Morgana's magic responsible for the illnesses, though they might attract the so called Plague nonetheless.
    So lets concentrate on the Squib line: that would be Hermione, I suppose. If her parents are truly dead, was it death by death eater? It's not like Hermione has any other confirmation than Dumbledore's word and that of the Order. Nothing too reliable it appears these days. What happened to Crookshanks, our trustworthyness-detector?
    Great thing to bring Luna into the equation.
    Don't you think it's rather suspicious of Merlin (if it's only his portrait to pull the strings here) that of all the talents and brilliant minds littering this world it just so happens that the initial group is only composed of people who have crossed Hermione's path directly or indirectly in the department of mysteries? No real strangers there. Such a coincidence! *cough*
    Chaaaaaa, I love it if a fic gets my mind spinning with ideas.
    Cheers,
    Moi
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  • From ANON - Amber on April 19, 2011
    this was a really good chapter and when are they gonna learn that Hermione is Le Fey's descendent that is gonna be awesome and Lucius id gonna be mad
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  • From ANON - lilashannah on April 17, 2011
    I love this story it just sets me giggling. Hope you post more soon.
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  • From StillHorny on April 15, 2011
    You keep teasing us!!!! And you made us wait sooo long for the next bit of torture...you truely are a sadist. But we love you for it all the more.

    I would not mind a threesome or even a moresome. Voldemort, Severus, Rabastan (spelling?) with Hermoine *I would take her place, if you need*. Then you could have Lucius finally fall for her; but Antonin (spelling?), should not have any fun.

    I hope that you post again VERY VERY soon!!!!
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  • From ANON - Nerys on April 15, 2011
    To be honest, I think you should follow your wishes to what you want to do with a fic: threesome or not. However, you do risk that your fic becomes very similar to Magentasouth's then. So, you need to weigh if you think you can still keep it original if you do that.

    Also, I agree with some of the previous reviewers about LV not being the sharing type, but that's a personal take on a character and everyone has their own.

    Last, you need to keep in mind that the fic should be posted in the right category of AFFnet. You have it in the HET (HG-LV) section now, not in the threesome, moresome. So, if the threesome becomes the main pairing, you should post it there. If it's just an occassional event, you can keep it in HET/LV-HG with a warning for F/M/M. But if said triad becomes the primary pairing, you should shift the story there.

    Anyway, glad you're writing again and good luck with making a choice.
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  • From ANON - CollegeBrAT on April 15, 2011
    Lovin it! Please continue and I cannot wait for the next chappie! The plots crazy fun and I cannot wait to see what happens yet. Love how you have LV and Hermione falling into little tiffs. Lol. I picture LV sleeping on the couch after having something thrown at him. Oh, and please, please no Triad (if you mean having Hermione falling for two people, please nope.)...Sometimes it is ok, I think, no can't do it, that's why I come to the LV/HG part of the site...I am a huge LV/HG shipper. I just can't stand the whole triangle thing and having Hermione fawn over two men, plus, I highly doubt LV is a sharing type of man and I don't see Hermione as a very indecisive woman. ;) But I promise to try and keep reading if it happens, I really like the story (chappies could be a little longer. :D). More LV/HG!
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  • From Avivafae on April 14, 2011
    WooHoo! Love the chapters you've added. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From Popcornbandit on April 14, 2011
    It's good, it really is. The thing is I think you should get a Beta to help your grammar/Spelling mistakes. The story is progressing good, yet it also feels rushed, once again maybe consider getting a Beta? :]

    Other thyan that splendid and can;t wait for the next update! :D
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  • From ANON - Asinah on April 14, 2011
    Uhmm.. dont make it a triad.. I prefer having this lovely dovey love between hermione and old voldy.. seen too many triad and not that interesting...but i love the chapter that you have updated.. thank you!! was worth the wait.
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  • From ANON - MrE-Quecky on April 14, 2011
    Yay!!! Loved !!! Hope u rite more soon :D
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  • From ANON - shell on April 14, 2011
    I like your story so far...very interesting. You might want to double check your spelling...it is 'crucio' not curio, but other than that I am finding it very entertaining. I think a triad would be fine for this premise...especially if Severus is the third...he is my favorite!
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  • From purefaith91 on April 13, 2011
    Yay! I was so glad to see a new chapter. I love this story. I was also thinking that Hermione was the heir, but wonder if Luna would have seen it. It is surprising that she did not see what had been done to HG by the Order. Who knows, Harry may come over to LV's side when he finds out what they were doing to HG. Your
    ragging on LM cracks me up. He is such and easy target. Excellent chapter. On triad question...I will read your stories no matter how you format them. p

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  • From ANON - Amber on March 04, 2011
    Please Please Please update this soon I cannot wait to see what happens when Hermione gets all her power back and what she will do to the Order that is gonna be awesome
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