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Reviews for Millicent Moons Luna

By : JayDee
  • From ANON - jacque on March 07, 2011
    Oh this was wonderful. I'd love to see more of this story, more of Luna with Millicent in the time after this first hook up. I can see Luna being into assplay with Millicent's big ass.
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  • From ApolloImperium on February 12, 2011
    Very nice use of the prompt *snickers* I can see Luna taking the soft way in response to Millicent's hardassness!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 27, 2011
    Poor Millicent. A moon can be a harsh mistress, eh? And who'd have thought Luna had such hidden depths? A terrifically inventive use of the prompt, and a warning to watch out for the moonstruck ones.
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  • From pittwitch on January 27, 2011
    Woo hooo! Thanks for not making me wait until the bitter end for this week's prompt. Loved this ... from the title right to the end with Luna's cries being muffled in the corridor, but especially liked Luna totally throwing Millicent out of her safety zone with kissing the moon! Thanks for sharing, PW!
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  • From FairySlayer on January 27, 2011
    So Luna takes down the tough girl with tenderness? I haven't read the series or seen more than the first two movies, but you managed to fill in some of Luna's personality for me, even if unintentionally. (No, not that she's a lesbian ;) but the way she interacts and goes around barefoot.) I'll also admit that there have been times when I've heard women say, "Kiss my ass!" and I truly wished they meant it in the pleasurable context.

    The progression is fast but believable, but it takes enough time for some (very) juicy detail. The contrast of stocky, loud and mean versus wispy and quiet was very nice. Also, I always love moonlight imagery, so when Millicent pressed Luna against the wall your description of her became extra delicious. The idea of the pictures watching made it extra naughty too, and after that one snort it's clear that they decided to stay quiet to enjoy the scene.

    Without a doubt, it's great how you managed to use two type of moon in the story, and they were my favorite kinds too.

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