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Reviews for Under Your Feet

By : tlb69
  • From aidoneuskiss on March 08, 2011
    Very interesting. I love forbidden pairings. Bill and Charlie are one of my favs but very seldomly are they written well, mostly PWP. Not that I'm complaining, but I'm a sucker for a good plot, even if it's miniscule. This whole love hate relationship between the two is written beautifully. Charlie being the one who's more emotionally involved and Bill the 'I hate you because I want you and really should only want my wife' guy. There's not alot of badboy Bill fics out there and this one he comes off as a beautifully brutal bastard. I loved it and especially the ending where Bill comes back for more only because his wife is gone and Charlie's so desperately in love he takes him as he can get him. It's so reality-like. Not all relationships are flowers and chocolate. Sometimes one person is just in it for the sex and uses their partner's love to their advantage. It sucks but it's life and it's not always beautiful. Then again, maybe that's just my interpretation of the story in my cynical mind.

    Whatever. Point is: LOVED IT!! Keep writing and be inspired by...well...whatever inspires you.
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  • From ANON - HerRoyalGoddess on March 07, 2011
    very icky (in a good way) however it was like the proverbial train wreck I just couldn't stop reading Xx
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