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Reviews for Things Don\'t Go As Planned

By : Seawitch
  • From jyoung84 on April 01, 2011
    Did not see that coming, snape a good guy? interesting way to include harry. my guess for snape's love was way off lol but you still have not said how ginny fits into it. can not wait for the next chapter. S
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  • From itachiblood on March 30, 2011
    wow i wonder how hermione going to handle that and how remus is going to react to the news. there are so many thing going on in my mind about how this might play out.
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  • From purefaith91 on March 30, 2011
    What a bunch of idiots. Why would they put them in the same room when they knew what would happen? Excellent chapter, but I feel really bad for Hermione. It is bad enough that she had her life ruined for her, but now she will be getting raped on a regular basis (since no one seems to be concerned for her well being). And what is the Ministry going to do when they find out that she is breeding? Very interesting!
    Oh, I did not wonder why HG could not smell the sex before the door was opened. I wondered why she could not smell the sex on GW or notice the perfume that she smelled on SS earlier. Looking forward to next time.p
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  • From jyoung84 on March 30, 2011
    for the second child how bout going with the book and name it teddy, or randi( means Fair, wise judge; wolf shield.") got a feeling one of them will need a shield lol. once again great job and keep up the good work
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  • From purefaith91 on March 27, 2011
    I'm guessing that Hermione's wolf is not the brightest wolf of her time? How could she not put two and two together when she got the potion from Snape via Ginny, and Ginny told Hermione that Molly said it always smells like that after having sex? She (or her wolf) seems a little slow on the uptake. AND if she can smell in a room through an open door, why can't she smell someone that walks up to her? Very interesting. p
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  • From xcrystaldragonx on March 27, 2011
    LOL! Sounds like Snape's been having fun with Ginny to me ^_~* I'm enjoying the story so keep it up!
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  • From itachiblood on March 27, 2011
    im going to place my bet on ginny. keep up the good work
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  • From jyoung84 on March 27, 2011
    i think i know who it is lol. once again great job keep it up
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  • From itachiblood on March 26, 2011
    i like it. it was funny how dumbledore put ron in his place.
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  • From jyoung84 on March 25, 2011
    bout time ron got what was coming to him. never did like him that much in the books. can not wait to see how you finally get the two wolfs with each other. are you going to find parings for harry or just focus on the two you already have? as always keep up the good work. S
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  • From itachiblood on March 23, 2011
    i like it. i hope you update
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  • From jyoung84 on March 23, 2011
    i like it, aways figured some would get bit during the 3rd year. keep up the good work
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