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Reviews for Trial by Fire

By : sazsazzel
  • From Ladydragonstar55 on December 29, 2013
    This is awesome hope to see more
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  • From PeriLover on July 14, 2012
    Great fic! Can't wait for the update! And I think Voldie and Dumbles should be left with - - - wait for it - - - - Molly Weasley!!
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  • From ANON - AnikiCrim on March 18, 2012
    ...woah. Tripped out. I have neighbors who are twins. And they're names are Lucas and Blake. Woah. ...Loved the story by the way. :)
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  • From ANON - Missa on March 04, 2012
    Love it!! A great take on a altered creature inheritance. I would say you should give the babies to Molly and Aurthur, but look how Ron and Ginny are turning out...How about... Remus and Tonks! Or, Draco and Luna... That could be an interesting one.
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  • From Leania07 on January 12, 2012
    Blake and Lucas, I like the names and it sounds like they will be a handful. I can't think of who the baby Voldie and baby Dumbles would go to, sorry.
    Hope you get some good suggestions!

    Leania
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  • From Maiyanna on January 09, 2012
    Voldie should be raised by muggle-borns, that way he wont grow up to hate them. Dumbles should be raised by..... Im not sure I would say the Weasleys, but that just doesnt feel right.
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  • From bloodshound on January 08, 2012
    that was really cute.
    so, on the dumbles, voldi potential parents, who are our options. do they have to stay in country or can we shuffled them around the world. I think Tom would benifit from a traditional japanese or similar disicplin focused people upbringing. So could dumbles for that matter. Somewhere where they're heavily into duty and honour as well as loving support. i suppose that's pushing it a bit, huh. >>
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  • From ANON - rosealynne on January 08, 2012
    Awesome story and I think Luna. Lol what a way to grow up with loony lovegood as "mother"... U know what ..that sounds kinda fun :) I can't wait for next chapters keep up awesome job
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  • From ANON - Saphire Phoenix on January 08, 2012
    I find that my name is very apropros.... Well, you could leave one of them with the Weasleys. Bill and Fleur would be nice and stable without dropping the poor child into the madness of the Burrow. Voldemort would definitely know what it was like to have a family this way and/or Dumbledore would have a lot of kin this way too. There is also Andromeda Black-Tonks (I can't remember her husband's name)that would also provide a loving home and also let old snake-face grow up with a family and still be a Half-Blood in everyone's eyes.

    I am really enjoying this story, so please keep going. I also love the image of a Punk-Draco with multi colored hair.
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  • From ANON - Selkie on December 14, 2011
    Please please please tell me there's more...

    I really want to see the twins :)
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  • From bloodshound on November 17, 2011
    Volderdore and Dumblemort. snickers. that's great. looks like i missed a chappie. pooh.
    Ah well, the dada proff doesn't really surprise me (they seem to have a habit of being odd... or treacherous.) but minnie did surprise me. Hallo, pair of Phoenix here. It should have been a 'well dah' option. shrugs.
    I'm glad Mio came around and played a part in making a difference.
    Now they just need to find someone un biased to raise the pair of ex dark lords. probably be best to keep who they are under wraps, but make DAMN sure that they are well cared for in a benevolent environment. Might be wise to send them to a different wiz school too. They and Hogwarts have some unfortunate history and we don't want any future past flashes or dejavu moments happening.
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  • From djaddict on November 13, 2011
    Ack!! Evil author!! What a cliffie!!!

    More please!!! lol
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 12, 2011
    Those BLEEEEEEPING "women" i shall kill them for hurting Sev... i hope they die slowly. Anyways Awesome story so far u write so well that i feel like im liveing it( hence my first sentence sorry bout that btw lol.) Cant wait for more updates im addicted to this story
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  • From ANON - Rosealynne on November 11, 2011
    Another awesome chapter.. i love how u had sev tending to the garden in muggle jeans :)
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  • From ANON - Rosealynne on November 11, 2011
    Awesome first chapter. U caught my attention right away like any good author(tho it does help that it is SS/HP :)] Keep up the good work 10/5 stars so far off to chap 2 wonder what hps creature is...
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