Click Here!

Reviews for His White Queen: A Prequel

By : jsu1660n
  • From Daddys_Little_Witch on August 11, 2021

    Read this about a million times, and love it every time!!


    Report Review

  • From Daddys_Little_Witch on March 17, 2019

    I have read this story so  many times and I still love it! 


    Report Review

  • From Daddys_Little_Witch on January 03, 2016
    I love this story, I've read it so many times! Please update soon!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Simi Nightmares on September 22, 2013
    I love this story and really hope that you will continue it
    Report Review

  • From Daddys_Little_Witch on August 10, 2013
    Love this story!!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Rare Winter Flower on July 06, 2012
    This is my favourite story. I Don't know how many times I have read it. The plot is really interesting and I love the way Tom and Meira are portrayed. Tom is still the ruthless Dark Lord, even though he has fallen in love with someone and Meira can be just as ruthless due to her childhood, yet she can also be caring and loving to those who are loyal and care for her such as Barty and Ginny. I also adore the part of Grindelwald being her father; it made the story very dramatic and shows the reason why Meira is as she is.

    However, some parts of the story were unclear as you did not clarify. It is not told what happened to Linnet, or what happened to Jonathan after Guinevere's death; did he not protect her? And whatever did Grindelwald do when Meira did not return after the 2 day time limit; was that the part where Dumbledore detached him? I have had to draw conclusions on these matters myself as you did not include these issues in the story.

    I don't really like the way Dumbledore is portrayed as "evil." I admit it is really clever to turn the tables like that, but I reallywasnot fond of it. Also, it seemed as if Dumbledorwe truly did care for Meira at the beginning but diminished after she went off with Tom.

    Overall, one of the best stories I have ever read and a personal favourite. Very well- written and amazing use of expression and vocabulary . Extremely Sorry for the long review and if I have offended you in any way whatsoever.
    Report Review

  • From DB1 on May 19, 2012
    @15 omg I love this story!! Please please update. I love hermione goes dark stories. There are not enough written in my opinion.

    DB
    Report Review

  • From JAngelDreams on November 14, 2011
    I'm really enjoying this story and would love to find out what happens next. The relationship between Hermione and Tom is fascinating, please continue writing
    Report Review

  • From LeaflessGrace on November 07, 2011
    This fic is a real gem. It took a little time to get into because of the OOC Hermione moments and the fact that she looks to be a bit of a mary sue, but I really enjoyed it. I think that the way you write her is going to become better and better as the fic goes on and as the plot gets darker and more twisty. She'll fit in perfectly with the AU you're crafting.

    Hope to see more soon!
    Report Review

  • From AlasseaM on September 20, 2011
    I can only say: Wow, you have to finish this one :D It's very good and it's different from others.
    Though Hermione's "transformation" from Mione to Meira went a little too fast.
    But I love it :D
    Report Review

  • From wavedancer70 on July 18, 2011
    I'm diggin this keep up the awesome story...........
    Report Review

  • From newtothis on July 10, 2011
    great story, well writen, and beliveable, the only thing i hate was the ron bashing, he save harry life many times, he saved hermione life, he there to make you feel better when you sad, so there a lot good about ron, and hermioen should have been a adult and told the truth.
    Report Review

  • From NinjaVampirex3 on July 10, 2011
    I've been reading this story for a very long time, almost since the beginning, I suppose. So I decided I absolutely must review, because it's trully one of the best if not the best story I have read in a while. I have this strange fascination with Tom Riddle, and the way you show him is no less than perfect. My compliments on this great story as I am waiting for more chapters. I hope you will post them soon :)
    Report Review

  • From IkuniHattori on June 17, 2011
    Actually (I just read this chapter two days ago at work) Harry learns about the dragons right before the meeting with Sirious. It actually almost makes him late for the meeting, in fact. Great chapter, as always. And of course, I love the jealous Ginny. :3
    Report Review

  • From WilliamAndroes on June 08, 2011
    Apparently someone doesn't like the french very much lol
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!