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Reviews for The Game Beneath the Lake

By : lordoberon
  • From JanisJ on July 28, 2011
    Ooooooo fuck that's hot! I really need to tell you that it is soooooo appreciated that you write so well. I feel like I've been wading through so many poorly written fics lately that this is such a welcome change. Your idea is basic (and is necessarily the very definition of what a PWP must be) but the execution is sublime. The lack of grammar and homophone/homonym mistakes is a breath of fresh air, as is the excellent sentence structure and style of description. The pairing is wonderful and often overlooked; we don't know much about Blaise from the books, but he's portrayed superbly here and you've excellently used your imagination to make this reader very happy :)... and Draco, true to form. I loved your little details of his personality, which totally work with his canon character-- but are perfectly translated to how he might/would/could be in sexual situations. AND thank you so much for making the sexual play so realistic (and hot)! So many times in fics, it's painfully obvious the author has never done any sort of anal play, while either being way off the mark, or simply regurgitating what they've read in others' stories. You did a great job of showing rather than telling, and that makes for great writing. Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU!!!! You restore my faith in ADULT fanfiction! :) I hope you write more in the future-- I'd love to see more from you!
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  • From tlb69 on July 28, 2011
    I like how Draco plays his game, though Blaise seems to be a good match for him. The game is played nicely and the foreplay is quite hot, as is the image of Blaise throwing Draco over his shoulder. Nice start.
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  • From Jessica86 on June 01, 2011
    This was realy hot. And I really want to know what Blaise has planed for Draco up in the bedroom...
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  • From Tesgura on May 08, 2011
    God Damn that's hot, It's such an accurate depiction of both those boys too, I can deff see Draco pulling that shit just because, and pushing Blaise past his limit. Thanks for doing this story, there aren't nearly enough DM/BZ stories. I know in a few stories they're a side pairing but no one really goes into them.
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