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Reviews for The Lost Mate

By : morgansbane
  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on July 13, 2012
    Way cool so far!
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  • From imsandir on July 12, 2012
    I really like what you've written so far, it's really interesting, looking forward to more chapters!!!
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  • From HeartStar on July 11, 2011
    I would love to see more of this when you can please thank you.....
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  • From Christopher11 on June 28, 2011
    A good story thus far, though it needs a little cleanup on grammar and a little less 'rushing' through the story. The plot point about Petunia being under spells is a good one and I would like to see that expanded on in future chapters.
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  • From Sampdoria on June 28, 2011
    Interesting plot so far, I am happy to see the update. I hope you will tell who the father of Aras twins are soon?
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  • From SilverLion on June 28, 2011
    The concept is good. The execution is decent. Other than some spelling errors, and one canon issue, this seems like a good story. James was a chaser, not a seeker. But then, I've always felt that the best lies also hold some truth to them. What I'm saying is, is that the more accurate your story is, the more it feels like it belongs to the canon universe. I try to go for that when I write (not sure I'm always successful, but nobody's perfect; besides perfection is for those who are making money from their writing).
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  • From xoburntofferingsxo on June 28, 2011
    I really like the idea of your story. Have you thought of maybe getting a beta? While your idea and story concepts are strong, it's kind of hard to understand who's talking, which hinders the flow of the story. I really do think it's a wonderful story, so please don't take my words as mean because they are not meant to be seen that way.
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  • From bloodshound on June 28, 2011
    Pffft ahahaha. Sev fainted. lol. It'll take him a while to live that one down. ^^
    Still, i wonder if this will make him a bit less of a git. I do hope so.
    anyway, long time no post so glad you're back. :D
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  • From HeartStar on June 06, 2011
    Very nice I hope to see more soon.
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  • From dominique1 on June 06, 2011
    i do hope you update again i found the story here than went to fanfic and read and i love it want more and pet a witch this is way different than anything ive read like it
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  • From dominique1 on June 06, 2011
    god this is a really good story
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  • From bloodshound on June 06, 2011
    Interesting. So there were spells making petunia act like such a cow. Who cast em and why.
    Still, hopefully Harry will be better cared for now.
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  • From dominique1 on June 05, 2011
    to good i do hope you finish it
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  • From dominique1 on June 05, 2011
    tonks sev and herimone the twins can harry be with viktor or marcus draco is over used
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