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Reviews for Slave

By : AquamarieneStardust
  • From Smile317 on February 14, 2022

    Just found this story. Great story. I am sorry it wasn't finished. 


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  • From ANON - forgot my login... on December 09, 2013
    I like the idea of this and I do like a submissive Draco but I had to give up on this as the volume of mistakes made it impossible for me to enjoy it.
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on December 08, 2013
    aww that was so sweet im happy that they are all together again and now they are expecting a little one. i cant wait to read what is next to come for them. please update again soon .
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on October 26, 2013
    i am in love with this story. the dark lord and his father are cruel and heartless. they know he will die without his mates but do not care they would rather just use him for there own means then discard him when he dead. please please update again soon
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  • From bloodshound on August 03, 2011
    woah, kinky jah. No really my thing since i'm religious and doing it in a church... even in the cry room is a little to far south on my comfort meter. At any rate, I'm sure other people might appriciate it though. I hope she gives him some aftter care... that's gotta be rough on the bod.
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  • From bloodshound on June 25, 2011
    Heh, Draco's gunna get adicted to muggle convinience I betcha. :P
    neglected eldest huh. I can semi relate (eldest girl in the family)Still, it's intreresting that they're relatively open minded about the magical stuff but not the matrimonial stuff... so much for the statute if secrecy huh.
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  • From bloodshound on June 22, 2011
    Malfoy mingling with muggles... *Grins
    Harry's not a critter so he can cope with his mates away, yeah?
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  • From bloodshound on June 21, 2011
    Should have dropped his bomb by Owl. It'd've kept him out of the firing line.
    Still, ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Scaley cock. Sucks to be Draco.
    Glad they got him out of there and I'm thinking he's never, ever going back. Ever.

    It got 4 main characters that i w0ork with. (I say wwork with as half the time I'm not sure what they're going to do either. :P) And a bunch of minor characters... most of which are inserts. I find an epic story, borrow their set up and slot in a character or two. Where I can I ask permission though. ^^

    Wouldn't Snape have known her if she was an order member?

    Lol typical snape. 'I WILL know your secrets'. He's so slytherin. ^^
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  • From bloodshound on June 17, 2011
    well, that explains the spelling. In which case, kudos for attempting to write at all. must be hella frustraiting. Well they sure cleared up the mate thing quick and about the twins, yeah i could so totally see them doing that. =P
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  • From bloodshound on June 17, 2011
    also, watch your spelling and stuff. Believe it or not, bad spelling makes a story harder to read.
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  • From bloodshound on June 17, 2011
    do veela have mates in this?
    How does one get out of being a pet? When she frees them?
    What in the world possesed her to take on the twins?
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