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Reviews for Only a Slave

By : scaramouche36
  • From Luthistar on February 26, 2017

    Please update soon!!!!


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  • From MacPhisto on March 25, 2012
    PLEASE UPDATE!!!

    WHY DOES THIS SITE SUCK SO MUCH???
    WHY CAN WE NOT PM PEOPLE???
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  • From MacPhisto on October 30, 2011
    PLEASE UPDATE!!

    WHY DOESN'T THIS STUPID SITE ALLOW US TO REVIEW INDIVUAL CHAPTERS OR CONTACT THE AUTHOR??
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  • From MacPhisto on August 17, 2011
    very lovely!
    the pets are finally learning their place!

    are you going to use my suggestion about the milk?
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  • From StarrCrystal on August 12, 2011
    Damn...Harry is done...wow
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  • From MacPhisto on August 03, 2011
    can you try to incorporate milk enemas?

    also, no more Rod, Snape, or Voldemort
    old guys are gross
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  • From StarrCrystal on August 02, 2011
    GREYBACK!!!!!
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  • From brasilkat on August 01, 2011
    Oh, this is deliciously awful! Can't wait to see that devious things occur when Snape arrives
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  • From StarrCrystal on August 01, 2011
    Aw man. He was so freaking awesome! But ou well I cant complain. The story is VERY good. Both versions are good but I must say with a heavy heart that I like this one more than the other :'( but its all good though
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  • From StarrCrystal on August 01, 2011
    Ok now I get it. Thanks for clearing that up a bit. Will Brian be in this one as well? I REALLY liked him. He was awesome!!!!
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  • From Daye on August 01, 2011
    At the moment this just seems like a list of nasty things happening to Harry, since your prose is a bit sparse. I quite like the concept but you need to get more inside Harry's head, his thoughts and emotions to really get me involved in the fic.
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  • From SalonKitty on August 01, 2011
    Hmm, I do recall reading the first attempt at this story, and I agree it had too much plot going on with a bunch of characters we didn't care about.

    Now, here, you're making it more interesting by concentrating on just Harry and Bella. However, you're doing the same thing you did last time in that we don't get any perspective on the action through the characters. You simply have them acting out various sexual scenarios and forgetting to include their thoughts, their feelings, their point-of-views, which would make the story loads more interesting to read. Give them both a little more of their personality and you just might have something here.

    Otherwise, carry on.
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  • From bloodshound on July 31, 2011
    sounds familiar to something I read a little bit ago... Though only the golden trio were snatched andd they were eventually rescued.
    There a reason Voldi hasn't killed him? Does he know about the horcrux in Harry's head?

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  • From StarrCrystal on July 31, 2011
    This story is very good but I must say...I really loved the first version better. Will the Patil twins be in this one? Im not really a big fan of them. Also I didnt think there was too much plot in the first version. I really thought it was awesome. But if you feel that you have to change it its not my place to have you change it back.
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