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Reviews for Moon Wolf

By : OrionNightRage
  • From wavedancer70 on November 09, 2011
    Loved it just wished it was longer but I'll be looking to read more of your stuff keep up the excellent writing.
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  • From TransientTemptation on August 07, 2011
    I agree with the other reviewer... it's extremely hard to read or make sense of the oneshot as it is currently. I did manage to get to the end of it but it was hard to enjoy the story with the distraction of the format. Just fixing it from being in one block of text to separate paragraphs would go a long way in improving things.
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  • From Jilliane on August 07, 2011


    Sorry to be the bearer of bad news, but I tried, and I couldn't do it. This oneshot, in its current format, is unreadable. Its just one huge block of print that boggles the eyes. Please fix the formatting; separate your paragraphs and dialogue. Perhaps a beta would be a good idea; in the little that I did manage to read, I saw quite a few punctuation mistakes, and in some places, no punctuation at all. I really would like to read this, so please, do consider making the changes.
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