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Reviews for Scorched

By : Ataraxia
  • From Remarkable on November 09, 2011
    Wow, very hot and erotic. I love your style. I don't read slash so I haven't come across your work before. I might have to sample Snape/Harry. I suppose it might just depend how it's written before I decide if I like it or not. HG/SS is my all time favorite.
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  • From CryingCinderella on August 08, 2011
    Oh the cliches! Gah! Don't say I never taught you anything? HAH! Though it was delicious. And the little spanking sunburn was lovely. Oh how absolutely delicious. Well delivered. And her eagerness to be taught. So utterly fantastic. Excellent job wrapping it up.
    ~CryingCinderella
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  • From StarrCrystal on August 08, 2011
    Oh wow!!! So intense!!! Kinda sad that its done though :( but hey every good thing must come to an end though. But I enjoyed at as it lasted!!
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  • From ChaosLady on August 07, 2011
    As lovely as that scene is...it's too soon. Unless this story is a quickie?
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  • From CryingCinderella on August 07, 2011
    Oh I do so enjoy a delicious bit like this- but as he only had time to really massage her shoulders and the back of her neck; and I'm sure the sunburn had managed to coat the back of her legs- I would liked to have seen how when he thrust her back on that couch- those little stings from that sunburn how deliciously torturous that could be. Eager to see what's next. Of course she's clever- you know what's next...please please please let it be a good shag with the over eager professor who's going to perhaps insist on rubbing more salve over those sunburned legs...before indulging her. Can't wait to find out.
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  • From ChaosLady on August 07, 2011
    Oh! What an evil cliffhanger! ~_^ Can't wait for more!
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  • From StarrCrystal on August 07, 2011
    With just that last word I just HAVE to read the next chapter! Update soon please!!!
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