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Reviews for Amy Narcissa Malfoy

By : dutchgirl1
  • From ANON - Seren on February 20, 2012
    I really do hope you add more to this story because it is so sweet and engaging. Amy aka Mione should either get with Blaise or Nott ;)
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  • From Gabby0515 on November 21, 2011
    This is an interesting story! Hope you update soon.
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  • From purefaith91 on October 04, 2011
    Oh, Harry needs to get over himself although it is kind of sad that he is not accepting something that Hermione has no control over either way. Love this story still. p
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  • From ANON - fire fairy on October 04, 2011
    can you explain to me please why you chose harry to be a prick to amy in this story rather then ron whos family hates his family and why in this chapter you had amy make harry leave when in other chapters she wants to talk to him and wants his support to do that she has to talk to him but when he finaly dose come to talk she dosen;t want to even though you make it seem like she dose from her reaction to him please help me
    understand this thank you
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  • From sarahdaye9 on September 20, 2011
    Good chapter, glad she finally got her glamour reversed. Can't wait to see who the mystery guest is!
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  • From Jewels812 on September 14, 2011
    I am enjoying this story...I can't wait to see what happens next...I think Harry is going to be walking into the snake pit with some griffindor backup....i hope he pulls his head out soon but if he doesn't it will make it all the more interesting...i wonder who out of Theo and Blaise will vie for the attention of Amy, i know Ron will put up a good fight but I just don't see him winning her in the end...
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  • From ANON - Pixie on September 14, 2011
    Not to sound mean or anything but Hermione could surely understand how being Lucius daughter would hurt him, Harry. After all Lucius supported a man that killed his parents, leaving Harry with relatives that hated him, and she got both sets of parents and even a brother. Please dont take it the wrong way cause I love ur story.
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  • From purefaith91 on September 13, 2011
    I am always excited to see an update on this story. I am surprised that Ron did not make any comments and was looking to see how Grangers responded to her change in looks and name. And Draco's buds are going to putting Draco on guard duty to protect his hot new sister, who will surely end up with Ginny enjoying showing her how to showcase her new self. Love it. p
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  • From wavedancer70 on September 11, 2011
    hello write like a busy bee cause this story is jumpin sooooo more chappies please.
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  • From CafeAuLait on September 10, 2011
    You're welcome.

    I didn't see the 'barren' curse coming. I wonder who will help her lift the curse and what will be needed to do it? It's nice that she's settling in with Malfoys. How long before they start at Hogwarts?

    Hermione's and Draco's personalities are quite flat. They each have fiery personalities, which are completely lost in this story. Your Draco and Hermione come across as meek, and there's something off with their characterizations. I've read them OOC before but this is more than that, it's as if they are on the page but not apart of the story which at times makes the story a tad blah.

    I'm sorry that this is a tad harsh, but no matter how interesting the plot is, the characters have to have a strong presence. I'm still improving as a writer, so I know that it's not an easy task, but a little prep work ( making character profiles) will help you to discover who they are and bring that out more. The character should always move the story, not the plot.
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  • From CafeAuLait on September 06, 2011
    I hope Hermione enjoys her stay at Malfoy Manor. I was glad that she told the Grangers that they would always be her parents. Parents are the people who raised you, not necessarily the people who helped bring you into the world. There isn't a rule that says a person can only have one set of parents.

    I don't know who Hermione's love interest should be. I know you don't like Harry/Hermione and I'm not much of fan either, but you've already created angst between the two ex-friends and then there's the fact that Draco and Harry dislike each other. Harry acting like a complete prat for part of the school year, then finally telling Mione that he has feeling for her, but she's not having it and he has to re-earn her respect, while dealing with his hate for her brother. idk, lol.

    I am Dramione/Tomione fan and since neither of those Syltherins are in the running :( I would suggest Theodore Nott, unless you want to create an original character, maybe a new transfer student.
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  • From CafeAuLait on September 06, 2011
    'The Friends,' was a better written chapter, although at the end you put Hermione heard her birth parents car pull into the drive when it should have been adoptive parents.

    Harry should be ashamed of himself for walking out on Hermione. I'm happy that Ron and Ginny are willing to support Hermione. I wonder what Draco's friends think of the news. I can't wait to see how things unfold for Hermione at Hogwarts.

    Thanks for sharing.
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  • From Sampdoria on September 06, 2011
    Thank you for a great update. I enjoyed the twist about Harry being the ureasonable one and Ron the friend, it is most often the opposite (Which I don't complain about as I have a severe allergy to the Hermione/Ron pairing, but Ron as a friend, that I can very well live with:-)) I think Hermine made the correct decission to move into the manor, she will want to know her herritage and that is the best way to do so.
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  • From newtothis on August 30, 2011
    yes yes yes you made ron the good guy thank you
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  • From CafeAuLait on August 30, 2011
    She should continue to be a Gryffindor. The sorting hat put her in Gryffindor based on her personality traits, and I'd bet you a galleon that the hat already knew she was a pure blood...the hat always knows.

    I like Hermione's relationship with Draco; they seem to be having a smooth transition. I like Narcissa, but she really needs to refer to Hermione by the name her adoptive parents gave her. I think it's somewhat disrespectful of Cissa to refer to Hermione by a name that's basically foreign to her. I know her mother wants to get to know her, but she needs respect her boundaries. Also, Hermoine needs to speak up more and stop just going with the flow. It's a bit OOC for her.

    The boys were sooo wrong for not writing to her for an entire summer. *smh* I wonder what's going to happen when they return to Hogwarts? I also want to know who her love interest will be and if she already has an arranged marriage?


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