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Reviews for Somewhere in Time (Outtakes)

By : serpentinred
  • From Sherlocked1971 on March 01, 2015
    Chapter 3: Poor lord Voldemort changing the timeline into the wacky timeline did nog work out for him. Yes Harry did not vanquish him (or did he?)but it left him wit an agreeable Hermione.

    Mmmmm, whatever is worse being killed( or not as is the case) or not having the love of your live next to you?

    Whatever made him send them back in the first place is my next question.

    I'm getting confused now.....

    Have you ever read Dark rivers of the heart by Dean Koontz btw?
    I can recommend that concerning timelines and time travel.

    I thought Somewhere in time was an excellent read, maybe I'll reread it.
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  • From ANON - TomTiddle on February 12, 2012
    I'm glad that you made the distinction between this sucky Hermione and -our- Hermione. I'm also glad your Tom is slowly realizing this! /flail

    I love these stories so much, and am simply dying for an update. Whether it's the outtakes or the actual thing, please please update!
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  • From Shamonti on January 24, 2012
    I love the outtakes, but I really want to know what's next in the main story, However, this has been a pleasure to read. My favourite scene was when she kneed him again!
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  • From AlasseaM on January 24, 2012
    Al right *inhale* *exhale* Pfeeewww...

    I couldn't stop loving the AWESOMENESS in this chapter.

    I kept laughing at Hermione's ignorance. She was panicking because she had kneed a PROFESSOR, while she should be more concerned about kneeing the Dark Lord himself, which by the way was HILARIOUS.
    I mean... that's the SECOND time as he himself stated "Not again".

    Hermione MAY think that it's getting old, but this just proves that Draco and Harry were righ-- ehm, stupid... Hello, My Lord. *smiles innocently*

    And the Alohomora? Please, that was INGENIOUS to add on it. LOL. No, she'll never learn.

    Ahem... I would have been quite confused too, if someone I barely knew talked to me as if I was doing something I have done in the past with him. Not exactly the most sane- I mean - CLEAR way to express yourself.

    And he asks her about why she chose someone like Ron. I agree 100% with the Dark Lord here. She is definitely choosing wrong. No one can be as good as the all mighty Dark- Professor Riddle.
    He's simply too dim. Strategy is something even a stupid person can do. I know someone who is a fantastic in the military field but is completely useless otherwise.

    *snorts* Someone is getting jealous of her best friends mother *wink* It's funny that she KNOWS that nothing is between Lily and the Dark Lord while the "real" Hermione seems to get a little tad more jealous of Lily's closeness to the Dark Lord.

    "As if the Dark Lord would ever like someone like you" - Oh yes, I'm quite sure our darling Professor picked up on that thought... Tihihi...

    ""Quite the contrary," Riddle said softly, and he moved even closer to her. "You might find that you are wrong in your assumptions about what the Dark Lord is thinking."
    Oh shit." - Oh, shit... that was what I thought too xD Here he confirmed that he was both good at - sorry, My Lord - a MASTER at Legilimensi and implied that he had the feelings for that that she wanted. Can we live happily ever after now? No? Okay.


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  • From ANON - courtney on November 23, 2011
    These outtakes are amazing!! I can't wait to find out more about what happens in this timeline, especially between Hermione and Professor Riddle. I feel like we'll get to see what their relationship would be like without Hermione attacking/defying him every time they are alone; perhaps he will be quite romantic, but not to fluffy! Thanks for sharing.
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  • From janasi83 on October 09, 2011
    Aaaaaargh!!! You can't just stop there, give us more, more!! Brilliant! I want to know about that kiss of theirs... ;)
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 28, 2011
    I am a huge fan of these outtakes and your original story!! I really like how this one is filling in the backstory for Somewhere in Time. I love that your characterization of Hermione is right on par with her, but she's think about the Dark Lord and how to save him!! Overall, please don't stop writing :D
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  • From Popcornbandit on September 12, 2011
    CHAPTER TWO, I"M DYING OMFG. WHAT IS AIR!!!

    Poor Hermione, shes so intelligent and loyal but she just doesn't see whats right in front of her face(and under Lockharts nose), she's just worried about her Lord.
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  • From ANON - Alassea Malfoy on September 09, 2011
    Oh, that's so ironical xD Riddle wants to be the Dark Lord xD
    I love the outtakes.
    And Harry staying in the classroom, adoring Tom keeps making me think of Draco's comment in the latest chapter of SiT "Yeah, your favorite professor". LOL
    Just keep going :D
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  • From Shamonti on September 08, 2011
    love!
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  • From iheartskittles on August 24, 2011
    Oh Hermione and her ridiculous devotion to Lockhart! Ha! That was cracking me up. Poor Ron doesn't stand a chance. I'm simply heartbroken over this fact. Hehe. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Alassea Malfoy on August 22, 2011
    Wow, you simply HAVE TO continue this. :D This is amazing!
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  • From ANON - kit on August 21, 2011
    ah! this is fantastic, i love it! i'm a little curious what will happen if riddle finds out about hermione's crush on lockhart. can't wait to read more! ^____^
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  • From ANON - midnightermoony on August 20, 2011
    I just finished SiT before reading this outtake, so havent reviewed the original yet. Your take on Tomione has set the bar for mee, i was completely captivated reading SiT! Tom Riddle is so mysterious and devious and cunning, the way he absolutely should be, nothing soft or innocent about him. You portray him so well, it's so fascinating/entertaining!

    Anyway, every one of our fav. characters are so IC i just feel the need to applaud you. And Slughorn conspiring to encourage theeir 'relationship' was hilarious. Then, not only are your characters and their reaactions genuine, you also managed to turn the time-travelling cliche into something truly riveting and plot-twisting. (ive spent a few hours puzzling over Tom time-travelling all over the place and all its implications)

    Anyway, superb job! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - mekom on August 18, 2011
    I really enjoyed this chapter. It is great to be able to see what happened in the new timeline. It clarifies some things. I hope you continue writing these "outtakes." I would like to see how this Hermione continues to deal with Professor Riddle.
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