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By : estherkolbe
  • From ANON - AKCChamp on July 17, 2015
    Loved it! More please or another story!
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  • From jules3677 on April 29, 2013
    Kept reading through the 41 chapters of your story. Interesting. Very Interesting. I liked your characterisation of Severus. You gave him colour & depth. Harry not so much. He seemed to be missing character. He was rather one dimensional & very bland. The sex scenes, similar; bland. Really you had the skeleton of a marvellous story but you didn't manage to flesh it out with any detail. I think you have crafted the beginnings of a spectacular story here but need to to give it further work. Anyway, good luck with your future stories.
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  • From ANON - Kelei on February 09, 2013
    "Be bonded"?
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  • From magentah on December 20, 2011
    Lovely end! I would absolutely love to read a sequel. In fact, it saves me the trouble of asking you to write one. :) I really enjoyed this story--thanks for sharing it with us.
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  • From BloodTear on December 20, 2011
    I look forward to your sequel! I'm glad to hear there will be one as I was disappointed to see this story completed.
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  • From victoriawhitten on December 19, 2011
    hi :) i was so surprised when i saw that you had updated! i thought you were done with this story; but please, please, please continue this or write the sequel. i really enjoy reading your work and i think you are a wonderful writer! plus, your smut is delicious ;)
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  • From bloodshound on October 04, 2011
    well, that explains a lot... still, famous last words Har.
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  • From bloodshound on October 02, 2011
    phew, rescue. That was definitely NOT fun. GOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Draco! heh. Since his partners a dom, why would it bother him to have Sev reading his mind. *shrugs
    Still need to do something about Bella and the papa Snape shade... or whatever the hell that thing was.
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  • From Luxara90 on October 02, 2011
    Wow... great story so far. And I just had to review when I saw the comment above the 24th chapter saying you are from the northern part of Germany - that's just about the part I am from as well.
    Anyway, love the story.
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  • From BloodTear on October 02, 2011
    Awwww! Thank you thank you thank you! I feel so much better now abouttheir relationship! Great chapter!
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  • From magentah on October 02, 2011
    Glad to see an update! And to see Harry survive his torture. Btw, it's non-consensual, not non-consequential (sexual assault is full of consequences, as we can see here). Really really looking forward to the next chapter. I hope Harry doesn't suffer any/too many lasting effects from his abduction and subsequent torture, and that Severus lets him explain what happened before assuming that Harry ran willingly into trouble! Thanks for working this into your busy schedule. I can't even tell you how often I check for a new chapter--it's just sad. ;)
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  • From BloodTear on October 02, 2011
    Yay!!!!!! Draco saved the day!!! I'm so excited!!! So... Might there be some love and healing in an update soonish? Like today? Lol you know to make up For the horror Lucius put us through? Lol great chapter!
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  • From bloodshound on September 28, 2011
    pls Har, be alive... and sane when they get to you.
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  • From BloodTear on September 27, 2011
    Ahhhhhh! That better hurry! I am glad you're okay... I was beginning to worry since you hadn't updated!

    This chapter was another great one! I cannot wait until the next one! I hope they get to Harry soon!
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  • From Nikte on September 27, 2011
    Hi, it
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