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Reviews for Wrong time, right place

By : Suziesu74
  • From Madamdragon on February 26, 2012
    I am anxious as to what will happen when Harry fights Vol. Wonder if he'll die and come back like always and if that happens I can not wait to see Severus an emotional mess. Please update soon pleaSe.
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  • From Leania07 on February 09, 2012
    Oh snake poison hmm? She's being put through hell, and just when Remus and Lucius thought they could start making it up to her. Very intense interaction between Sev and Harry; glad the bastard is dead (Alexander). This is one action packed story with so many twists and turns, and ghastly situations thrown at them. Good chapter, and I await the next to see what happens.

    Leania
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  • From hotflower901 on February 06, 2012
    Hooray the snake is dead. Good bye Bitch. So long Alexander. Sev will heal the bite and Lucius and Remus will love her forever.
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  • From Madamdragon on February 06, 2012
    Good update. I hope you update again soon please.
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  • From hotflower901 on January 29, 2012
    Alexander has been a bastard for a long time. Harry just needs to kill them all.
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  • From bloodshound on January 28, 2012
    stupid, stupid wench. really what was she thinking... oh right, she wasn;t.
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  • From ANON - Sev'slove on January 28, 2012
    Omg...why has Amelia gone to him! It is her isn't it? Stupid Remus and lucius pushed her to leave :( update now!!!!!!
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  • From Madamdragon on January 28, 2012
    Oh Gosh. PLEASE tell me Severus didn't go to them. Oh Please. Harrys' going to have a heart attack. Update again soon please.
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  • From Leania07 on January 18, 2012
    Wow, very intense vision/memory scene and very well written. Thank you ever so much for the breaks between scenes, made it flow much easier for me. Glad you updated, and now I'll await your next chapter.

    Leania
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  • From ANON - Uchiha_Red on January 16, 2012
    I never saw Amelia offering Dumbles a chance at Immortality. Well done. I did however see Tonks side over to Voldemort, but hat's about it. I say well done on this story and please do continue. (I also don't see how you get inspiration for multiple sexual encounters between all the pairings, but I admit to jealousy.) Everything looks good on both the grammatical and puntualtional fronts, but if I could suggest throwing in a wrench into the plot like a major character death or capture. Just a suggestion hat you could take or leave. :)
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  • From hotflower901 on January 16, 2012
    Tears for Harry. Tears for Amelie. Joy for Draco. Hope for Dumbles and Sev. Death to Riddle and Alexander. Pinned to a wall and left to die for Beatrix. That is my thought for the day
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  • From hotflower901 on January 06, 2012
    Harry is very protective of what he considers his
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  • From Leania07 on January 05, 2012
    Oh, someone's not going to wake up happy! I quite enjoyed this chapter, however the "bouncing" between scenes can get a bit confusing. Perhaps using some type of symbol ( ~ ~ ~ ~, ****) to alert one to a scene change to another pair (or set) of characters will keep someone like me from having to re-read the first few sentences after understanding that the scene changed.

    That's my only suggestion, I'm waiting for your next chapter rubbing my hands together and smirking with glee.

    Leania
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  • From bloodshound on January 04, 2012
    yeah, big surprise there. couldn;t happen to a stupider chick.
    curios, i wonder why he's angling for sev. Sev's not pretty but he is compelling. Is it just to piss har off, cause if so, its working a treat.
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  • From jujukitty on December 30, 2011
    wow, just wow! so much for a simple snarry pwp huh? lmfao it was hot and intense to start adn the further you've gone with this, the better it's gotten. i love the two new relationships that have formed and sev and harry fucking like bunnies is just hot, and don't forget, harry said sev gets to top sometime too ;) great job with this, keep up the good work :D
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