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By : AquamarieneStardust
  • From Morbid_and_Sexy on June 13, 2012
    sorry about your loss. ch. 17 is awesome. I like how she dominates them. I thought Blaise was about to go into heat, and was very horny... so when will his heat come into the story.
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  • From Morbid_and_Sexy on May 10, 2012
    Wicked chapter! Almost makes up for how long I've waited. Lol...
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  • From jami_lee on April 24, 2012
    cool story!!
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  • From Morbid_and_Sexy on April 20, 2012
    This story is totally awesome and funny!!!!! I've read all 15 chapters, and I want more! Lol. Please update soon.
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  • From The_Dark_Soul_Magician on April 16, 2012
    I would like to request either Pansy or Hermione as a female mate for Tia.
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  • From purefaith91 on April 16, 2012
    Great start!!! Love the idea of Harry as a girl and with Draco. Also really like good Malfoys. Can't wait to see where you take this. I try to wait until a story is complete so that I don't become involved with it and then it not be finished. Please, please finish this one. p
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  • From lilone77 on March 25, 2012
    i love this story and i cant wait to see who the new mate is i kinda hope its a girl!
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  • From demonsangel on March 22, 2012
    As much as I love this story, this latest chapter was a bit confusing. I mean, first off, it was just hard to read due to a lack of spaces between lines. But first Tia is very hostile towards Ron and Hermione and suddenly less so? I get that she was pretending to be Harry but still, it was rather odd. I was actually confused to the point where I thought they were getting along and I had missed something. It also seemed a bit rushed and I wish the explanation of Dumbledore had been a bit more.

    Other then that it was a good chapter and I look forward to more.
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  • From magentasouth on March 22, 2012
    Spell check. SPELL. CHECK. And I don't mean check for spells - before you post - hit that button in word (under 'review') where it says review spelling and grammar. Every time it comes up with a query on a name eg. lucious - change it to the CORRECT SPELLING OF THAT NAME - i.e. lucius - not luscious. Google a list of names or something if you're not sure. Every word derived from the roman - e.g. severus, lucius, flavius, julius (etc) end in an us - not an ous. Spellcheck should pick up things like leied (laid) - names, you will have to look up. E.g. Percival - not percivle. But if you add the correct version, you will never again have them wrong after spell check.
    I can normally ignore a fair few spelling mistakes when i'm reading but there are just TOO DAMN MANY here. It's ruining the reading experience.
    The story would otherwise be very interesting and enjoyable if not for that.
    And i'm not really a spelling nazi but there are limits!!
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  • From Flare on March 22, 2012
    this is seriously great and I love how take chare your harry was please keep it up because I reallly can't wait to see what you have planned next and who you have planned to be the next/last mate.
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  • From Leania07 on March 13, 2012
    I'm guessing (since I haven't checked my e-mail since this morning and there wasn't a chapter to read yet) but I think Blaise. Don't know why, but it just fits; either way, regardless who it is, it'll be such a wonderful party!

    Leania
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  • From Leania07 on March 07, 2012
    Enjoying it so far, sent off that e-mail today. I've been busy past few days getting things straightened out, but should be smoothed out within the next week. I figured it'd be Ollie, but the question is is that all of them, or is there more? And can we say bedroom party??!! Woot! Is there going to be a female or is it all males?
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  • From Hardygirl133 on February 28, 2012
    *squeals* yay for getting Siri back!!!! I can't wait for Papa Tom's reaction to this news!!!
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  • From Leania07 on February 28, 2012
    Sure thing, I don't mind! I love feeling useful, and seeing as the other author I'm helping has life interruptions, I'm currently idle. You've been doing a wonderful job thus far, having dyslexia, I've heard, can be a real pain to deal with. I don't remember how an acquaintance of mine in college dealt with it, but I think she said her's was mild.
    Yay for usefulness!

    Leania
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  • From Leania07 on February 27, 2012
    Interesting, but I must ask, do you have a beta? There's a few spelling errors, left out letters, and other grammatical errors. Example: ...donation from Harry no matter what the mutt says the goblin will do as I say.
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