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Reviews for A Tangle of Webs

By : serpentinred
  • From ANON - Elifisa on January 04, 2015
    I love the plot. Plot is great. No, seriously, I enjoy your stories a lot. So don't be offended that I want to focus on the part that was just.. it was.. so... *giggles* Voldemort is the best. Voldemort plus begging - Christ, girl, I don't even have words. So well written too.
    Why can't Voldemort be real? *weeps, weeps and weeps some more*
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  • From Nerys on January 04, 2015
    SEQUEL!

    Because this so isn't finished.

    And since it's for my birthday (and Miya's), what I say goes. :P

    Anyway, as always, I loved your writing. Two Toms, who could ask for more? (Well, me, but ... just saying: TWO TOMS!). *whispers* He had more Horcruxes. ;)

    Thank you for our lovely birthday present.

    *hugs*

    Nerys
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  • From ANON - Stella Purple on April 05, 2014
    Nice! Update please!
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  • From ANON - a.k on October 26, 2013
    OH MY GOD THIS IS SO GOOD
    please, please, please update soon!
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  • From N2vivaria on February 02, 2012
    I was SOOOOOO excited when you included the Knights! The shout out to Nerys was cute too ^_^ Now I'm going to lose sleep wondering if Hermione accidentally gave some sort of magical vow to Voldemort to tell him EVERYTHING >.< This is so exciting!
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  • From Relatela on January 20, 2012
    Nice chapter! I still miss the "Somewhere in Time" updates, but this story is starting to seem really interesting! Looking forward to your next chapter =)
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  • From TheLadyMiya on January 20, 2012
    Oooh, the plot is thickening! And we finally got to see Healer Nerys... and Curzon! HUUUUUUUUUUM. I wonder what that means. Are they friends? Are they working for Voldemort? (Why wouldn't that surprise me...) And YAY at the boyfriend part XD Although, I don't know how I feel about Nerys blabbering about "Paulina's" boyfriend's problems to strangers. Tsk, tsk, tsk. That's not very professional ;) But she did seem to be rather... easily sidetracked. I wonder why.

    I'm really looking forward to see what will happen to Hermione and Harry now. Will they get their magic back? And what is "Todd" up to? Sneaky bastard, making Hermione promise to tell him everything. I'm sure he will take advantage over that sooner rather than later ;)

    Also, have your writing style changed? I really liked it. Not that it wasn't good before, but somehow, some parts of this just seemed richer, in some ways. Just small details, like with the mouth that called Hermione into Nerys' office, and the aroma in Tibet. Oh, well, keep up the good work and thanks for updating :D
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  • From AlasseaM on January 20, 2012
    Ugh.. those women in the beginning are annoying.
    "Resisting the urge to plant a firm kiss on those red lips, Hermione quickly entered Healer Nerys's office" - Lol, there are some lips you can't resist right? xD Like... like... Todd's xD

    ""If you don't mind, please tell her to visit me with her boyfriend soon. It's almost time for
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  • From ANON - Shan84 on December 18, 2011
    So I'm reviewing this on AFF cos that is where the smut is at! and where the smut is, is where Shannie will be XD

    Okay, so what a fascinating start! two years from the start Hermione has lost her magic and we find that Harry has as well... I'm very, very curious now. Several ideas are running through my head - including the revenge of a certain DL.

    I enjoyed reading how you portrayed Ron and Hermione's separation. It felt very mature and I guess, yeah, they grew apart. I mean we all know that they aren't meant for/compatible for one-another anyway. And yeah, Nerys is completely right in my opinion. There is always one half of the couple who moves on quicker compared to the other. I felt a bit sorry for Hermione considering it was only 6 mths later!

    Oh and yes, I think my cameo as the muggle sister was executed brilliantly OF COURSE!!! Yes, I know keeping Sirius and Alphard entertained means that I could have much more to do with Volde- *cough* I mean Todd. But that's okay, I'll just go home and get two certain other wizards to comfort me XPPPP

    Oh, I like that little bit you included about her being suspicious about men who are "too good looking". I can definitely imagine Hermione thinking like that... plus she was always looking for more than a pretty face... lucky Todd is intelligent too! ;)

    Ahhh and what's a good fanfic without a Malfoy peacock related joke hehehe *sniggers behind hand*

    Oh and engaged after 3 mths!!! useless fact but my parents were engaged after such a short amount of time too!

    Now, I'm interested in hearing more about the possibilities of death eater decoys, very interesting...

    Very good smut scene! very realistic... and yes, of course he needs to dominate. Why do I get the feeling that the smut has something to do with him harvesting the powers? Hmm could be completely off though! Oh I will be guessing and guessing though!

    And now we're off to meet Healer Nerys! hooray, can't wait for the next chapter! Any chance we'll get a Todd point of view??? I'm very curious!

    Thanks for writing and sharing xox

    Cheers
    Shan

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  • From ANON - Mekom on December 14, 2011
    Great beginning to your story. I am completely hooked. I wonder why Harry is losing his magic, and why Hermione loses hers. It will be interesting to see how Todd reacts to finding out about the magical community. I hope Hermione does that before the wedding. I can't wait till your next update.
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  • From janasi83 on December 14, 2011
    LOL @ Healer Nerys, how metafictional! Can't wait to see where you take us with this one...
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  • From ANON - Fleur K. on December 07, 2011
    I am fascinated. So...Todd is some sort of reincarnation of Voldemort and the Death Eaters haven't been wiped out.....and Todd/Voldemort is stealing magic to regain power? I have no idea. But I cannot wait to read more! You must update soon. Please :)
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  • From TheLadyMiya on December 06, 2011
    Yaaaay! Read the first chapter and am really liking this story! There is such a fast speed in this chapter, but since this will be so short, that's understandable. For some strange reason, I can relate to that Paulina Marcus... killing Death Eaters, working as an Unspeakable... yes, doesn't sound bad at all ;) Does she also have a handsome werewolf lover sleeping in her bed, perhaps? I mean, she obviously can't have the Dark Lord since he is all busy between Hermione's legs. Booooo.

    But great sex-scene! For some reason, I just loved this sentence: "whenever her pussy clenched in excitement around his manhood". I don't know really why, but that picture just felt so spot on! More of that, please!

    Also, very intrigued to find out what this loss of magic is about. Does "Todd" have something to do with it, perhaps? Or is it something else that "Todd" will have to help with?

    Nah, for some reason, I think it's Todd that's behind it. I wonder why ;)

    Oh, and don't you just love pleasing our Queen? Marrying Ron of to her. Hehe. So THIS is why you got sent those masseuses-guys instead of me? How unfair.

    Anyway, looking forward to the rest of this story! Good luck with the writing!
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  • From AmberDaze on December 06, 2011
    I love your story Somewhere in Time because I think you capture the Hermione/Voldemort relationship so well while staying true to the characters. I'm really excited to see how this story plays out as well - but I can't imagine Hermione without her magic!!! Can't wait for more!
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  • From Nerys on December 06, 2011
    I almost forgot, but this made me very, very suspicious.

    "it wasn't exactly the first time she had touched his hair, so she had no idea why he was opposing to it this time.

    He leaned forward again until their noses were almost touching. "You belong to me." ... Just as she was coming back down from her climax, a victorious smirk spread over his face and he looked at her once again. Lust had already made his eyes blacker than usual, and wild glee darkened it even further.

    She had no idea why he seemed so overjoyed,"

    Yep, I'm definitely very, very suspicious of that bit. It was hot, but definitely suspicious all things considering. XD

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