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Reviews for Savior Unwound

By : Camorgan
  • From ANON - staar on January 08, 2015
    OMG so good MORE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - samara on March 27, 2014
    Please continue
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  • From ANON - SnarryLover91 on March 15, 2014
    This is such a great story. I've loved reading it. Please update as soon as you can and keep up the good work.
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  • From Cathrine on June 14, 2013
    OMG I love it. Your story is marvellous. I love everything about it. Plot is good, characters are superb and sex is hot xD. I didn't find the flashbacks confusing at all but sometimes and only sometimes I'm not sure who says what but after few sentences it becomes clear. As I said your characters are simply great - Harry is cute, witty, submissive but only in bed and of course deliciously erotic! At the same time Voldemort is perfect just the way I like him. In the end these factors make your story one of my most favourite. I will be waiting for an update.
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  • From bloodshound on April 24, 2013
    i'm still absolutely loving this. i can hardly wait for more.
    heh, we all knew it wouldn't be long before paddy caved. ^^ this is where he's meant to be after all.
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  • From ANON - emma elizabeth pressnell on April 19, 2013
    Wow it is just BRILLANT !!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - queen reader on February 26, 2013
    I just finished reading the a/n at the end of the chapter. I was a bit surprised that you chose to print the flashbacks and timeframes without any identifying markings or indications. I don't know about anyone else, but for myself, they are a bit confusing and I don't really understand what you are going for with that technique.

    Please understand, it is not my intention to be insulting or rude and I hope that I'm not. If you feel that I am, then I truly apologize. But, remember, you did ask.

    As confused as I sometimes get (All confusion NOT being caused by your story), fiction is a way for me to relax my mind and enjoy a good story without having to work my brain too hard. If it's too confusing, I just get frustrated and end up giving up the story altogether. The truth is I don't have a lot of time left and I'm not willing to spend it confused and unhappy. I'm not ready to give your story up just yet; so I'm going to keep reading and hope I manage to get unconfused soon.

    Oh! By the way, I really like the story. I hope I mentioned that before, but if I didn't, there it is.

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  • From Jan on February 13, 2013
    This story is enticingly hot!!! Love it!

    Please update chapter 7 soon ^_^

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  • From ANON - BAFan on February 13, 2013
    Ch. 6 - Whew! That was...whew! I'm really enjoying this story. I've read other fics where Voldemort kidnaps Harry or Harry joins with him for whatever reason, but this one is quite different. The flashbacks aren't at all confusing; don't understand why people are having a problem with them. Dumbledore is rather chillingly fanatical regarding Harry's ultimate martyrdom, isn't he?

    Looking forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - she-who-waits-in-darkness on February 12, 2013
    Holy shit never seen this sorry before but it is amazing! I love it! Can't wait for more of it!
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  • From ANON - savannah19742001 on February 12, 2013
    I love this story and the flash backs give much needed background especially needed for Siri and Sev. A rare but brilliant pairing but without the background they would be sort of one dimensional. I really like that you are developing their characters. Can't wait for more...
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  • From jules3677 on February 11, 2013
    Extremely interesting story. Fascinating plot. A plot which I would like to see more authors expand on too. Liked how you have crafted your characters. The volatility of Harry & Tom give the emotional package of the story a sharper edge. To bring in the Severus Sirius relationship at the end of the chapter is grossly unfair. Thankyou for the interesting story. Hopefully you plan to update soon. Please!!!
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  • From bloodshound on February 11, 2013
    oh... WOW! *wiggles excitedly. An UPDATE! i truly thought this story had been abandoned. I so glad it hasn't. i read it ages ago and pouted cause there wasn't more. I'm soooo glad it theres more. *bounces.
    Still, are we done with the flash backs now, 'cause certain style or not, they were confusing as hell. i sorta though har was 13 when they mated. >> Yay for page top blurbs that explain things. ^^
    so siri is sev's mate or something similar?
    hells bells twinkles is one seriously deluded old gimp. oh no, things can't possibly deviate from what he knows. :/ since he doesn't believe it theres no way LV can have a true bond. :P prick.
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  • From ANON - savannah19742001 on February 10, 2013
    Wow! I have just started this story and I love it...this premise is really unique and the Sev with Siri thing is an awesome twist. I really love this story and can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - RosalieBlack on September 22, 2012
    Hi, I've got an account on here but it's not letting me log in yet.

    I loved the story! It was definitely one of the best Harry/Tom stories I've read since I've started on this pairing, much more believable than a lot of others I've come across. Are you planning on continuing at all? I would enjoy seeing Harry and Tom beat Dumbles :).

    Great story.

    Rosalie


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