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Reviews for Shades of Grey

By : SpeedyTomato
  • From rigger42 on April 27, 2015
    There's an interesting reminder -- I hadn't even thought of Ron and Hermione. Harry doesn't seem to be missing anyone there at all. Not that I miss them, personally.....
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  • From rigger42 on April 27, 2015
    Thanks for explaining the binding! I don't really get why Tom thought that sheer power would save Harry but I'll accept it, especially since Tom might not have intended an AK to start.

    Poor Severus. Was he in love with Lily or just friends? Right now that isn't totally clear to me and I'm not sure if we're being teased or if I missed an indication. :) I'm glad he is so outraged. Even though this isn't totally EVILLLL Dumbles - he is comforting himself with the idea Harry won't really die - he's still terrible.

    One other thing that baffles me is his expectation that suddenly removing the blocks on Harry's magic would be anything but an unmitigated disaster, because its been pretty well demonstrated that it would burn out his wand and be totally unmanageable at that.
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  • From rigger42 on April 27, 2015
    This is such a fun story. Harry, at this point, seems almost a bit too relaxed, but I'm partially chalking that up to the novelty of having some adults around who want to protect him, actually listen to him, and pay attention.

    The bit that doesn't make sense to me, really, is that Voldemort might have blocked his magic -- if he was trying to kill him, why would he stop to bind his magic, first? And he wasn't corporeal to do it afterwards.
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  • From ANON - starr on April 01, 2015
    Harry as a Cobra well that is not strange there with the 2 his with plus the 2 snakes ....so good that Lusuis got to talk to Snape about why he was not moving forward in the relationship with Harry... I knew it has to do with Lily...Thanks for the update !!:):):):):)
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on March 31, 2015
    Harry's animagus transformation is pretty cool. I'm also glad that Lucius and Severus hashed out Severus' issues. Excellent update!
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  • From ANON - autumngold on March 30, 2015
    Wonderful update! I love that Harry's animagus form is a cobra, that is just perfect. Hopefully it would help him get away from evil dark lords and manipulative old men. Severus and Lucius' talk was excellent, I am glad that Severus is willing to give their relationship a try. Marvelous new chapter! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - pooh on March 15, 2015
    Love your AN'S
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  • From ANON - pooh on March 10, 2015
    I keep looking at the chapter list to see how many are left and am pleased to what is left...!
    I am really enjoying this story. The list of characters just adds to the fun...
    haven't figured out how much is left or if this is complete but that just adds to the excitement...
    on to the next chapter!!!hehehe
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  • From ANON - pooh on March 09, 2015
    Oh, this is toooo good. With the snake and Sirius and Remus...Love it...back to the story...
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  • From ANON - pooh on March 08, 2015
    this story is fun! It keeps a slight tingle of tension while reading it...looking forward to the next chapter!
    Thank you...
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  • From ANON - Sam on March 06, 2015
    I really enjoy reading your fic. The story is refreshing and new, the characters loveable but not to the point of being out of character. An other point I always respect and adore is the slow pacing and development of the threesomes relationship.. which is the reason why I am a tad disappointed with the more recent chapters. I understand the need to wrap up certain scenes in order to move forward with the story but I didn't expect the beginning of Lucius' and Harry's kissing to be done just so.
    Nontheless, I can't wait for the new chapter and am waiting impatiently for the coming plot.

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  • From Leania07 on February 28, 2015
    Oh good, Severus is starting to let himself get comfortable with the idea. I wonder what the real issue is; something more than just Harry being Lily's son, I'm sure. So they're having more of a waiting game right now, won't last long I bet. With Voldie being a bit more 'unhinged' than the last war, and Dumbledore floundering, I bet the explosives are about to start. Question remains, is Voldie going to go all out manic in his attack, or will there be some surprise planning? As always a wonderful story; sorry I haven't been reviewing lately, quick reads before I try to focus on my own story. (Which I posted, surprisingly enough). Looking forward to your next chapter!

    Leania
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  • From ANON - autumngold on February 16, 2015
    Yes, Yes, Severus and Harry kissed! That is just wonderful! Along with the relationship of Harry and Lucius progressing, that makes this a fabulous new chapter! Thank goodness both Severus and Lucius are open to the change and progression of their relationship. Hopefully, this will keep them all safe for the end of the war. Excellent update! Can't wait to find out what will happen next!
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  • From ANON - LiAyra on January 15, 2015
    Okay. Big time jump between chap 50 and 51. Need more to process that well. Specially since in 50 snakes are still working on getting the guys to realize they like one another, then suddenly in 51 Luc and Harry have been snogging!

    Transition of this part and why Rem and Siri went to Amelia is missing. You mention that they did, and that Fudge is ousted but its a big jump and trouble following it.

    Love your work wo want to help when I can. You may also want to look at how characters repeat themselves and each other language wise. Sev talks to simply sometimes... will go back over and get some examples this weekend to help explain better!
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  • From ANON - staar on January 07, 2015
    yep i say that they are to gang up on Snape and get him going .... thanks for the update !!!!!
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