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Reviews for Blood Quill Consequences

By : EarthandWater
  • From Annecia89 on March 19, 2015
    I so loved this story!
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  • From ANON - Ginevra-riddle on October 19, 2013
    Hey, so I got most of the way through your story so far and to be honest I'm finding it hard to finish. It's very well written, and the plot is great! But what's bugging me is you have this set with Umbridge, which was year five. So they should all be fifteen. And yet you have Draco five months from his majority when Lucius dies, which happens when a wizard turns seventeen. Even if he was about to become sixteen, which is pleasurable for year five, I am so confused as to where that year went. Also, at one point you say Harry is only a few months from his majority as well, again where did that year and a half go, as we know Harry's birthday is in the summer and turns 16 after his fifth year finishes. This glaring irregularity is bugging the crap out of me. Also, what was the point of throwing in the animagus stuff if none of them, save one instance from Harry, ever use the skill. It seems like a complete waste of time for you to write, as well as a glaring plot hole for the reader. I just think you need to read over your work carefully before posting, or even have a beta read it....
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  • From jules3677 on June 11, 2013
    Really had a good time reading your story. You managed to weave a wonderful tale together. Harry kept getting stronger & more confident. I liked that Voldemort being vanquished wasn't an epic battle. Rather the well scripted action scene you wrote. Severus was an interesting character. One who seemed to tolerate all things Harry once he was in love. I rather liked your Snape character.

    The only person who didn't end up "happily ever after" was Lady Malfoy. Though now that she didn't have the threat of the abusive husband she was happy.

    Thanks for the entertaining story.
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  • From ANON - spk on March 27, 2012
    Definitely one of the best Harry/Snape stories out there. So glad that I found this. I have to tell you that I absolutely adored the way you wrote Luna. :)
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  • From ANON - spk on March 26, 2012
    I just have to tell you that I had no problem with how long the ritual was because it was absolutely beautiful and inspiring. :)
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  • From ANON - DragonAnimagus on February 05, 2012
    I'm reviewing Chapter 16. I quite prefer a bit of plot with my porn, and you've done a lovely job so far. :) I look forward to finishing the fic.
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  • From wilmon801 on January 08, 2012
    I am liking the story. I look forward to reading more.
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  • From ANON - sinayah on January 04, 2012
    I absolutely loved this story. Filled with believable plot, suspense, humor, and lots of my favorite couple! Cant wait to see what the two of you think of next!!
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  • From Danyealle on January 01, 2012
    I just wanted to say that I finished reading this (took me a few days) and I thought it was wonderful! Quite imaginative and very different than anything else out there. Kudos to you for that!

    As a critique though, I would suggest a beta to go over your work. I did notice some spelling errors littered throughout, grammar issues and punctuation problems. There wasn't enough to detract from the story but it would give it a wonderful polish and shine that wasn't there before.

    Overall, it was a most enjoyable read! Thank you for sharing it!
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  • From Recordkeeper on December 21, 2011
    that was a lovely winter solstice ritual where did you find it? i like the story so far. i just thought i would review that I liked that chapter.
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  • From CodyMThomas on December 18, 2011
    this story was pretty darn awesome, the only thing I couldn't figure out is except for Harry snagging Wormtail, the others never used their animagus abilities after they spent so much time and effort to get them. seems a bit sad, I would have loved to see them make the most of that talent and have some fun with it.

    It was a very well written story, and I'm glad you focused on the story instead of just the smut, (though I am a lover of smutty goodness.) and i think you did very well on this story.
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  • From ANON - DevoutSpirit on December 16, 2011
    Bloody brilient, I wouldnt mind a few little one shots of all the weddings, its sometimes nice to see what people can create for their versions of JKs characters and what they might like in a weeding, Nevile and Lunas would be awesome and I would love to go to that one ;)
    and maybe so Potter-Snape brats :D

    All in all i loved this story and the whole way you went about it. I wanst at all put of by the only one lemon, lots of little limes in a great plot based story is good enough :)
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  • From ANON - Francis Bonnefoy on December 16, 2011
    I just finished reading Chapter 2 (3), and I have to say that I really love this story! It'll probably take me a few days to read it, but I'm determined to finish it :) It's not often that you find something so well written; the grammar/spelling is nearly perfect (aside from one or two minor typos), and I love the writing style, there's a perfect blend between objective description and emotive reactions, and a perfect blend of prose and dialogue.

    You've kept everyone spectaculary in character, developing them slowly and realistically, so that they are really starting to evolve as individuals in a nice way and in a steady manner. The plot is fascinating as well, I like how you subtly broke away from the book's plot and yet at the same time keep very true to the canon, so that it's almost as if Rowling herself has come up with the plot. It's an amazing AU that keeps to the original series' style, canon and feel.

    Excellent job so far! I look forward to reading on :)
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  • From jujukitty on December 15, 2011
    just got finished reading the yule chapter, i actually enjoyed reading the ritual,seeing the reactions of the characters, plus i don't think it hurts to expose people to something they may not otherwise experience. the whole chapter had a lovely warm, fuzzy feeling to it, and you could just picture them sitting around the fire telling stories and eating and laughing and just enjoying the peace and friendship. the kissing wasn't a bad addition either ;) *skips off to read more*
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  • From jujukitty on December 15, 2011
    snape's thoughts on the party and towards albus because of it are just freaking priceless! i could so totally picture the growing look of horror on his face the longer albus described what the party was going to entail. *giggles madly and skips off to read more*
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