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Reviews for The Defining Prophecy

By : Landquist
  • From CafeAuLait on January 03, 2012
    This is the same review of chapter two, but I had to fix the glaring errors.

    I thought I would like this after reading the first chapter because I like Tomione, but I can't deal with a sniveling Hermione, and Harry's change happened entirely to fast. You should have let his darkside build up instead of plopping it down like a bolder only two chapters into the story.

    It's not perfect but better.
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  • From AlasseaM on January 03, 2012
    >_> If I was in such a situation, I would have gone mad.
    On the other hand, If I had to choose, I would choose the DL ;-)
    She must be quite stressed out, poor girl.
    And I must agree with Nerys. Why is it, that Dramione, Snapione and Lucione ALWAYS end like that, while many Tomione fics end with Harmony or Romione or Snapione being the end pairing. >_
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  • From Nerys on January 03, 2012
    "Note: The sub-catagory I've placed this story in does not necessarily present the outcome of the fiction." - You're not the first, and alas you won't be the last, to screw us LV-HG fans over like that. At least you have the decency to warn us beforehand that we don't have to bother reading this fic. I just wish the authors of these fics would post them in the list of the pairing they will go for. I never see it happening in the Snapione, Dramione or Lucione section that Hermione starts of with them and then, at the end, low and behold, she hooks up with Neville and lives happily ever after with him.
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  • From AlasseaM on January 02, 2012
    "weak stomachs, beware" - no kidding dude!
    It just isn't really fitting for Harry to think like that, and Hermione would normally be stronger, and not accept this. Greater good or not.
    Run, Mione, run!
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  • From bstephens2693 on January 01, 2012
    Amazing start!! I can't wait for you to add more!
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  • From CafeAuLait on January 01, 2012
    I actually felt bad for Lucius, lol.

    Good start, thanks for sharing.
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  • From AlasseaM on January 01, 2012
    Sounds interesting so far. :)
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  • From Citten on January 01, 2012
    i am really excited! i love the beginning of the story so far and i really look forward to more lots more and i am liking how things are going and how you have got the characters personalities so far and i am looking forward to all the others as well!!! i do hope that you will post soon and regularly!!!
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