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Reviews for Pinched

By : KohakuShadow
  • From ANON - delia cerrano on July 27, 2013
    You know what I'm going to say!! I really enjoyed it...good job as always even though that was a really unusual pairing.
    I liked the idea of Severus liking Charlie's "pudgy" body because it wasn't female feeling & Charlie had had feelings for Severus for some time.
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  • From CodyMThomas on January 06, 2012
    great story, the sex was hot and AMAZING, and I loved the house too. I have a fondness for sentient or magical houses methinks.
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  • From JanisJ on January 01, 2012
    LOVED IT!!! And soooooo happy to see your author name pop up after so (too) long. I suck at checking in with LJ, I think it's because I'm so busy that I only cruise around AFF in my little free time and I find the format of LJ's hard to navigate. Please consider posting to AFF as a matter-of-course after you do LJ stuff, if only to make my lazy ass very happy.... but also to expose so many others to your great writing.

    Very hot, very nicely done.... and really like the concept you dreamed up of a "pinched" residence..... made it an "a-ha" moment when they could hear each other wanking so clearly (which was totally hot by the way!) Nice touch about the wine bottle too.... but you may get some people railing you about the show "1000 ways to die" in which alcohol is absorbed more quickly-- and unfiltered through liver, etc.-- but I'm assuming there wasn't much left in there after they both took several chugs (with those oh-so-manly adam's apples bobbing) to do much damage. Also, the part with Severus not revealing right away that George was there but insisting that Charlie put on trousers was hiLARious! :D

    AND hahaha! You used the idea I had from "Snape's Skivvies", that he would have a complex about his traumatic experience of James' prank revealing his graying underpants! :) AWESOME!

    All in all, very well done-- thanks for sharing!
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