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Reviews for Stricken: The Principles of Lust

By : Chocho
  • From Woodlandspirit on September 24, 2012
    Great Story! Absolutely Loved it!
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  • From sammysplace on March 20, 2012
    oh you just have to give asher a brother orsister or two
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  • From jgoodman on February 12, 2012
    Love this story
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  • From ANON - Celestialuna on January 27, 2012
    OMG!!!Poor Harry, Draco was rather cruel. I hope he comes around.
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  • From ANON - Celestialuna on January 27, 2012
    Good chapter.
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  • From ANON - Celestialuna on January 27, 2012
    I totally love Harry/Luicus Pairings, good start.
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  • From LadyofClunn on January 22, 2012
    Oh dear. Harry should have told Lucius first... This is not going to go down well.

    I am enjoying this story very much - can't wait to see in what kind of family constellation they are going to live!

    The only thing that threw me off was the part about having breakfast in France. There are no diners in France unless they are trying to imitate America, certainly not in small towns. Waiters do not introduce themselves by their first names (or any name). It's just a bit too familiar for Europe and it would be downright rude to call a French person you are not friends with by their first name.

    French breakfast consists of croissants or maybe baguette with butter and jam with some milky coffee or hot chocolate. Cooked breakfast is nearly unknown. Nobody eats pancakes (or french fries - what are home fries???) for breakfast. Ordering steak well done might get you thrown out by the chef. It is also more than unlikely that they would have 'syrups' or peanut butter.

    I really, eally don't want to be patronising or anything, I hope you find this information helpful.

    I find the story very promising and am at the edge of my seat to see how things will progress from here on.

    Thank you for sharing!
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  • From Ajablue on January 22, 2012
    I have become completely caught up in this story. I felt a bit for Harry in this third chapter, but even more for poor Draco and he isn't a character I often find myself feeling for. I can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From phoenixmalfoy on January 17, 2012
    You have me hooked... Can't wait for the next chapter!!
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  • From SParker on January 14, 2012
    about #2...

    You know, all that mentioning about villa, chateaus, etc. ...had
    me looking them up since I've always wanted to stay in one, but
    you aught to give the California villas a mention, especially
    in Pelican Hill, CA...those are nice.

    Well, good to see that Ginny is going to be a faded memory [never
    did care for the character...in the books AND movies].
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  • From Jessica86 on January 13, 2012
    Wow. I do love this story. Poor poor Harry...Really hope that he tells Lucius soon and I hope that Lucius takes it cool. I love Harry/Lucius stories - especially when they are this well-written. Good job :)
    can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - SP777 on January 12, 2012
    I stumbled upon this by accident...and man did it hurt! Thank
    goodness, this was good enough to take the pain away! :-)

    By all means, please continue.
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  • From mmichelle97219 on January 06, 2012
    so far i like what you have is there any way i can be notified when you add to this story?
    michelle
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  • From Leania07 on January 04, 2012
    Interesting so far. I wonder what Harry will do, and if that would effect the possible future Draco/Harry pairing. I await your next chapter ^.^

    Leania
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