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Reviews for The Pack

By : Suziesu74
  • From Jan on April 15, 2012
    Very interesting story, hope to read more of it soon, though without so much repeats of the same scene with different POV.

    Please update chapter 5 soon ^_^
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  • From bloodshound on April 14, 2012
    first off, ginny you BITCH and certainly not in a good sense. Didn't they realize he'd be able to smell it? Seriously, how stupid and/or arrogant can you get. Molly, is an utter cow for this and I'd say they've just lost har for good. he won't want to be anywhere near them now.
    still, poor har. his mind and instincts are so at war with each other and now he thinks he's been rejected. sigh. that's going to take a bit to get over. Still looking forward to seeing how luc and snape tie in.
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  • From ANON - NickyNakole on April 12, 2012
    The stage is set so let the games begin...lol. Silly Ginny...
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  • From jujukitty on April 03, 2012
    !!!! oh wow, totally loving this, and the overlapping view points you're handling wonderfully,retelling stuff without making it sound repeated (if that makes sense), and the sex, just gah! *fans self*. and looks like ginny's just stepped in it lol. keep up the great work, i really can't wait to see more of this...not to mention how ron winds up with snape and luc *boggles*
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  • From ANON - Angelstone on March 30, 2012
    I love this story. I really can't wait for more. I think the parings are awesome (especially Severus Lucius and Ron). I can't wait for more :)
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  • From ANON - Mars Bubbles on March 29, 2012
    I like the concept its different from the other or I guess common wolf stories. The thing that bugs me a little bit is when you show the same event from different point of views. It gets repetitive and a bit harder to read. other than that I love it and can't wait to read more ^_^
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  • From bloodshound on March 28, 2012
    wow, i can tell this is going to be one rough fic on all of them. poor har is so confused and his mates are horribly confused as well. um, if both mates are male, how do they cope with needing heirs and such? adoption?
    sheesh, gin you stupid cow. well, that's going to take a bit to get over.
    who was that voice for siri, his animagus speaking?
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  • From ANON - din's fire on March 28, 2012
    Dum dum dum!!! Intrigue!

    Also, perhaps the story would move faster if you didn't repeat scenes from different POVs? It's nice to know what others are thinking but it gets a bit repetitive
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  • From ANON - GrayPup on March 16, 2012
    Snap, looks like neither of the wolves will be able to be 'tame' for long, if you know what I mean ;) Ah, I wasn't sure if I'd like this, but I have to say you have me hooked! The one thing that makes this entire story (well, what is is so far, cause we all know there's going to be more!), that makes this story so far incredible would have to be that you included 'the wolf's very real and very raw thoughts on the pack subject. It just makes it... Hotter. So much sexual tension it's crazy- in the best way possible! I noticed this is fairly new so I have hopes for updates, take your time though, what you've created already (as just a start, too) is magnificent! :)
    PS love the possessive, 'alpha' Remus at the end ;)

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  • From bloodshound on March 16, 2012
    that was a bit confusing at first, but i'm getting the hang of it now.
    I wonder how long either of the wolves can hold out and where ron comes into it.
    heh, draco and mio... oh that's going to be FUN.
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  • From ANON - thestralhorse on March 15, 2012
    this story is awesome!! i love it and I can't wait for the next chapter
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  • From NAnderson on March 13, 2012
    Well this sounds like a pretty hot story just form the first chapter :) I'm looking forward to more!
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  • From Rayne_Foxx_ on March 05, 2012
    Ahhh! :) I love it so far, so much emotion (and sexual tension) lol :) would love if you could shoot me an email when you updated! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - thestralhorse on March 05, 2012
    Great start to a story, i am really interested to see where it goes =)
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