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By : M.V.Avery
  • From ANON - on June 30, 2016
    MORE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Hurricane_Bridgette on March 06, 2016
    Ohhh I am loving a this AU. Still an arrogant dou he but yet oozes that sex appeal. I hope he is at the club too andgets to feel jealously for the first time seeing her with Sirus. Are you still updating? Here or FF.Net? I hope didn't just read these three great chapters of an abandoned story. Thanks for sharing it.
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  • From CafeAuLait on March 17, 2012
    I'm really liking it so far. The scene between Tom and Hermione was pretty hot. I like their dynamic and it will be interesting to read how their relationship develops.

    I think you managed to nail Tom's personality in a world where he's a normal human being. Although your Hermoine doesn't hold up to the one in the book. She's to vulgar and is missing the subtleness that's usually apparent in her personality.


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  • From CafeAuLait on March 14, 2012
    Dr. Riddle isn't used to someone like Hermione. I wonder how long it will take for him to get her to see things his way, lol.

    I like the little world you created...it's interesting.
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  • From AlasseaM on March 12, 2012
    Great! You posted it in here :D
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  • From CafeAuLait on March 12, 2012
    You're off to a good start. I've never read a non-magical version of hp, so this is quite refreshing. I look forward to learning more about this new world.

    Thanks for sharing.
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