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Reviews for Controlled Emotions

By : LeviosaHex
  • From bloodshound on June 01, 2012
    you know, for someone working on emotional control... har's were sorta completely OUT of control. I mean, it's great they got their lemon and resolved some of the UST but really, har needs to be MUCH more careful than that. He's going to see snape in far worse sitch's and he's got to be able to roll with it.
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  • From JanisJ on May 30, 2012
    Loved it! I love psychological topics being explored in stories (and the UST and hot smut is awesome as well! ;)
    A continuation/sequel would much appreciated....
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  • From tbsigma08 on May 30, 2012
    This was a great story. Very well written. A sequel is a must!
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  • From LaffyTaffy on May 30, 2012
    I definitely want to see a sequel! I want them to end up happy together and Controlled Emotions just didn't really end that way. So please write a sequel! I loved the smut scene though, it was awesome!
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  • From artemislecter on May 20, 2012
    This was absolutely brilliant. I love the story's originality. The characters are fantastically in-character. I noticed some minor grammatical errors throughout the story (mostly comma splices and instances where there should have been a comma before the end-quotation mark) but it was still easy to read and the errors didn't detract too much from the story. It was very intelligently written and I couldn't stop reading-- I read the whole thing in one sitting. I hope you decide to write a sequel-- I'm very curious to know how Harry and Severus' relationship continues, and also whether Hermione gives any more thought to her "anger" with Draco. Thank you so much!

    Ta,
    Artemis
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  • From lordoberon on May 17, 2012
    aaaaahhh it's so great! I LOVE IT! awesome fic! very interesting. I'm glad it wasn't all just about UST, there was a lot of thought and emotion and plot in this fic.

    what happens next? sequel, please! I want to know why Severus is so sad...I feel there is something he is not telling Harry...pelase include more info in the sequel, i want to see Harry defeat Voldemort and lead a happy life with Severus...=)
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  • From lordoberon on May 17, 2012
    it's so GOOD! The convo, the anger Harry felt, I'm glad it was tough, but in the end it was sweet!

    Please have 1 intimate chapter?
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  • From lordoberon on May 17, 2012
    aaahhh this fic is good! I'm sorry I didn't review every chapter, because this fic deserves it!!! aaaggh it's very...I really feel they are in-character and that the emotional stuff is well-written, and I like the psychology stuff, it makes me think about my own life. ALso the intimate scenes are hot...=D can't wait for more! heheheheh....

    I like Hermione's filthy mind. That made me laugh out loud. =D
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  • From Jien on May 12, 2012
    Would definitely love a sequel (Especially if they did that memory thing and Snape will never get his memories back >:D)
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  • From moodysavage on May 11, 2012
    This is soooo not complete!!! I have read this story over the last several days and totally love the storyline. Those first several chapters where Snape kissed Harry and invaded his space were sexy as all get out. Really awesome tension. And I loved how Snape practically jumped Harry as soon as there was a viable solution to take care of the Voldemort sensing his emotions problem. Snape wants Harry just as desperately as Harry wants him... I really like that.

    I also liked how Harry kept looking at Snape throughout their whole time together. I think that would be perfect to come in as a way to save the memory of their time together since Snape's will probably be lost. Maybe the left behind torn clothes will give a clue lol.

    You also haven't taken care of Hermione and her attraction to Draco. She hasn't taken her potion and wasn't Draco's reaction to his own potion interesting? Would like to get into some of his thoughts too :)

    Continue!!!!
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  • From kitmistress on May 10, 2012
    OMG you can NOT leave it there! thats so mean to leave it there! I want to know how Harry blasts Voldy's face off (oops sorry that was violent) and will Sev and Harry get back together? There's so much more to this story!!!!! Please write more!!!

    Kit
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  • From severusluciuslover on May 09, 2012
    i am really loving this story!!!!!!!! i hope there is a sequel or another chapter!! keep up the good work!!
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  • From Madamdragon on May 09, 2012
    Aw cute, but I wonder what has Sev so worried. Hope more is to come soon please.
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  • From Janna on May 09, 2012
    Brilliant. Please continue the story.
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  • From LaffyTaffy on May 09, 2012
    I want a sequel!!!! That was just too good not to continue it!
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