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Reviews for Ar Sciatháin Sciobtha

By : SenNightShade
  • From sammysplace on May 03, 2012
    i think your story is awsome .im new to this site and dont know how to set up the story alert so would you please email me with the next chapter when it comes up

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  • From twilitdragoneye on April 29, 2012
    This is brilliant!! I love how slimy and twisted Dumbledore is trying to manipulate Harry. I can't wait to see what the reactions of everyone else will be. Thank you so much for the glossary too by the way. I haven't had too much trouble keeping everything straight but this helps so much. Great job on the chapter can't wait to see the next one!
    ~Pen
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  • From ANON - just an HP fan on April 28, 2012
    i think your prologue is an excellent example of the pervasiveness of subconcious racism. i was really excited to read this fic based on your description, but i just couldn't continue. i'm sure you didn't intend for it, but each of the vassal races of drayches were described as having some variation of dark skin contrasted by your description of the ruling drayches who all (except for one group) had pale skin including your most beautiful drayches having alabaster like skin. i don't think you should change anything that you've written because you've clearly put lots of effort into building your characters and this universe, but i think that you and many others should try to remember that whiteness isn't a requisite for beauty and dark skin shouldn't be an immediate indicator of servitude.
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  • From bloodshound on April 27, 2012
    thus introducing the end of Har the dumble pawn.
    is the prophesy still valid or is it made out hole cloth. If it isn't there's no reason har can't just got screw the lot of ya and leave... he probably wouldn;t wish to as there are some people he cares about but still. I wonder how V will react to this. on the plus side he'll probably never have to see the dursley's again.
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  • From BellixiesPixies on April 26, 2012
    thnk goodness Dumbles plot did not work
    thank u for the update
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  • From Leania07 on April 26, 2012
    Interesting progress, and ohhh the nerve! Lying to his face like that! Wow though, Harry's a little vicious thing! *evil grin* I await for more, keep up the good work!

    Leania
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  • From savannah19742001 on April 26, 2012
    wow, I am totally enchanted with this well thoughtout story and I can't wait for more
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  • From coopershawk on April 26, 2012
    I'm on tenderhooks waiting for each new chapter. Thank you so much for writing this intriguing and wonderful story.
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  • From Janna on April 26, 2012
    Great chapter. Thank you for updating. I can't wait for more.
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  • From BellixiesPixies on April 24, 2012
    aww i am hooked! this lookes primising.
    how can i know when u update??
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  • From amanda2590 on April 22, 2012
    Good start. I like this story.
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  • From alma on April 22, 2012
    Yay, the truth is out. good chapter.
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  • From Leania07 on April 22, 2012
    Oh interesting!! I like this so far, and I wonder how things will pan out. Dumbledore crossed a line, and I'm eager to see how things play out. Keep up the good work, and I await the next! (Wonder if Harry has to continue in the Tournament now that his 'identity' has been revealed.)

    Leania
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  • From Janna on April 22, 2012
    I can't wait to find out the results of what happened. Thank you for taking the time to update.
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  • From ANON - blue on April 22, 2012
    Hot damn! I can't wait to see what happens now! Great chapter.
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