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Reviews for Thou Shalt Not!

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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on February 09, 2013
    Yes, you redeemed yourself. That was a much more interesting chapter. Oustanding!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on February 08, 2013
    Hmmm waiting for the kids to get involved.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on February 08, 2013
    Kinda of boring, but we are making progress too.
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  • From ANON - mary blackman on January 21, 2013
    i loved this story if you do an update or sequel please send me the link to it thank you
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  • From ANON - jujukitty on November 30, 2012
    very intriguing story so far, so many plots and twists and names to keep straight, but definitely not boring lol. i'm curious to see how the news is received by all the kids. keep up the good work, i look forward to more of this :)
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  • From bloodshound on November 30, 2012
    ooooh, plotting planning and further plotting. most excellent, mwhahahaha. will ex riddle be able to have kids?
    it looks like sev has things well in hand despite dumbles finagling in the back ground. i doubt dumbels will let it lie for long, but mean time, what he doesn't know he can't counter. So yay, up the 'dark' side!
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on November 30, 2012
    Thank you so much for updating this! I know you said in your author's note that very few reviewers wanted you to update this first but I know I am probably one of the few reviewers that did. Lovely update. I am also glad to hear that you will be updating your other stories.
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  • From ANON - Seren on October 17, 2012
    I have read your previous works; Unlikely Heros is one of them. I like how you cleverly explain how Dumbles is not as amazing as the books portray him, for one he definitely seemed to tweak things his way and keep up the amazing clever storylines. I will at some stage write the plot bunny I have in my head but it is more challenging.
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  • From ditch_kitty on October 16, 2012
    I love the story but you made a mistake on the birth record for lily; you said she's male.
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  • From ChaosLady on October 15, 2012
    Short but sweet. A surprisingly pleasant little interlude.
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  • From ChaosLady on August 09, 2012
    I knew Dumbledore was dastardly but this is down right diabolical. Excellent update.
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  • From bloodshound on August 09, 2012
    wow, dumble bumbles level of manipulative bastard is rising to unbidden heights. May the fall out crush him completely. well done on keeping the future past streams straight to date. Still, it's nice to know even he has to bow to the goblins when they start throwing their weight around. Nice to know theres SOMEONE out there that can pull the old slime up.
    I look forward to seeing how V's ret con goes.
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  • From bloodshound on July 19, 2012
    He does the past changing thing sooooooooooo good. I look forward to seeing how things fall out this time cause you know dumbles isn't just gonna roll over and it will take time to unravel his plots.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on July 19, 2012
    What a bunch of shocking revelations! I can't wait for more!
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  • From TalisRuadair on June 25, 2012
    I do like your stories but I am noticing that you tend to reuse the same back stories for Snape and Lucius quite a bit. I've seen the I came home and found my parents dead in all three of your stories I read. I admit that there is still quite a bit different between each one, but I just wanted to make that assessment. Also, with regards to this story. I do love the pretense of it. I cannot wait to see what he does with the information that Lily is his sister. I cannot help but wonder if he will blood adopt both his self and his twin sister. Would Lily take well with being removed from her family?
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