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Reviews for Weasley’s slut

By : yamiyugi23
  • From supergirl on September 26, 2018

    This is cool I wish there was more

     


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  • From ANON - Kakashi on June 08, 2016
    I really hope that you will update this wonderful story. I really love it
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  • From ANON - Kakashi on September 05, 2015
    It is such a good story. I hope you will continue it!!! Pleaseeee
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  • From ANON - kakashi on August 03, 2014
    OMG! can't wait for more. Please update!
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  • From horsesrules on July 05, 2014
    write more its really good
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  • From ANON - anniy on May 31, 2014
    Why have you not finished it?! I love this story by the way.
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  • From ANON - The Pink Fuzzy Elephant on May 19, 2014
    This is an interesting premiss
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  • From ANON - blackcallalily on May 14, 2014
    Awesome!!!! hope you update soon!!!
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  • From milapink on March 28, 2014
    I found the story very interesting. And very sensual. The other brothers enter the story?
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  • From Jan on March 05, 2014
    9 please ^_^
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  • From horsesrules on January 29, 2014
    Write more it's really good
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  • From ANON - cassie15747 on January 01, 2014
    please please please update this story I want to read more but it has not been updated in a long time :( so please update again soon
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  • From GertrudeFlint on November 04, 2013
    Okay, I've read the whole thing now, and here a few more comments in case you ever come back to this story.

    I liked the fourth and fifth chapters, but honestly felt that your story's consistency fell apart in the sixth and seventh. Mostly because of Harry's sudden severe illness, and its cause: sorry, but I just couldn't bring myself to believe that Dumbledore, Arthur, and Ron would all stand by and do nothing as Harry drank a mystery potion handed to him by Fudge. This was in stark contrast with the previous scene of Arthur getting angry and protective in response to Umbridge's treatment of Harry. - And if this whole convoluted twist was for the purpose of making Harry an incubus... well, surely there must have been a more plausible way to do it.

    On the other hand, the magic underwear in Chapter 4 was rather fun, and creative, and I was glad to see another affectionate Arthur/Harry scene. Then seeing Harry with the twins in Chapter 5 was delightful - all three of them so hot and so happy. If you continue this story, I hope there'll be more scenes like those, and more exploration of the characters' emotional connections.
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  • From GertrudeFlint on November 04, 2013
    Review after reading the first three chapters.

    To be honest, I wasn't sure about starting to read this story - I've been rather turned off slut!Harry fics after seeing too many bad ones. But your story's turning out better than expected. I think it's because you've clearly put some thought into Arthur's character, and you take the time to describe his emotions and actions outside the sex scenes. This makes him seem more real. I'm getting a good impression of affection and closeness between Arthur and Harry: their hugs, their talks and laughter.

    In the third chapter, I'm glad you wrote Harry sitting on Arthur's lap and telling him all his problems, and being comforted. For me, that talk made the following 69 scene better: adding trust and a kind of sweetness to it.

    Just one piece of advice: fix your spelling of George's name in Chapter 1. It's George, not Gorge.

    Haven't decided yet if I'll read further, but if I do, I'll write another review later.
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  • From ANON - Cass on July 14, 2013
    Please please please wright more
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