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Reviews for Sluggish

By : SillySilenia
  • From ANON - TrinaK on September 06, 2014
    I am very excited to see where you go with this. Will Harry have trouble with salt? What made you pick a Magical Slug inheritance? Also, exactly how far back did one of his ancestors decide to mate with a Magical Slug? The story seems interesting.
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  • From ANON - Asia on October 30, 2012
    Hi! Just wanted to let you know that I really enjoy what you have done with the request! I hope you decide to continue and if you do would you mind emailing me a copy? I am rarely on this site and I will completely forget about checking up on the fic but I would really like to see how you plan out he rest of it!!

    AsiaAoki@hotmail.ca
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  • From draconicflare on May 30, 2012
    Well I gotta give you props for having a go at this. I came here from looking at the challenge request, in half a mind whether I want to have a attempt myself. It's definitely a weird inheritance for sure, but there is a lot of potential for sex and hilarity with the various characters. Hermione will probably consult a book and ask him embarrassing fluid-related questions, The twins will think it's brilliant and tease him mercilessly, Ron will be ron-like, seamus might think it's hot, Dean will think it's weird, Neville will try and be a supportive friend and maybe offer a couple remedies (could be thoroughly embarrassing for the both of them!). And then there's the slytherins! Malfoy will be Malfoy-like. Blaise will never turn down a chance to fuck the boy-who-lived, Crabbe and Goyle will guffaw and snort, and theo, sweet, silent theo, will stare, quietly intrigued.

    You could take this in so many fun, interesting and perverse directions. Best of luck!
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  • From Sylvia on May 18, 2012
    *gasps* I'm actually writing a review... haven't done that in ages, so good job! XD lol

    Heh, Poppy wins! XD lol I love how you added in the betting pool for Halloween, and it makes sense seeing Harry's record so far XD lol

    I remember seeing this challenge in the forums and it interested me, so I'm glad you are taking it up! Can't wait to see where this goes *^.^*
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  • From hasnohat on May 17, 2012
    Waiting oh so patiently... oh so very patiently. You said "tomorrow" like two days ago, and even though I know it wasn't a promise, that hasn't stopped me from refreshing the page every five minutes. btw.
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  • From hasnohat on May 14, 2012
    Sounds very intriguing so far! Very original, with lots of potential. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
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  • From draechaeli on May 14, 2012
    This is interesting. please continue, I would like to see where this goes. Keep up the good work!
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  • From despairs on May 13, 2012
    Usually when i see the words slime or slimy, i will want to turn around and walk away from a story, but i like your writing style. You have intrigued me and so i will stick around to see where this goes.
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  • From Morbid_and_Sexy on May 13, 2012
    It's funny at least. Go Poppy!
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  • From JayDee on May 13, 2012

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  • From bloodshound on May 12, 2012
    at least har has been smart/sensible enough to go to the hospital wing by himself in this one. in others it happens at the dursleys or har tries to hide it. I wonder what he'll be... and i do hope he doesn;t get a slime coat all the time. that'd be damned uncomfortable.
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  • From RogueMudblood on May 12, 2012

    Seeing JayDee's request all those months ago made me extremely curious if anyone would take it up, and I'm very glad that you've done so!

    I love your sense of humor! You had me sniggering right at the beginning with his commentary on the copious amounts of fluid in his bed. And the commentary on Dumbledore was priceless!

    The pool on 'deadly threats to Harry Potter's life' was a nice touch. ;)

    Thanks for sharing that - it was an auspicious beginning! I certainly hope you continue. Happy writing!
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  • From Green_eyed_lover on May 12, 2012
    Hmmm this is..... Interesting to say the least. I think it's too early to really decide if it's good or bad but I'm definitely interested. Out of all the creatures I never thought one would come up with a slug. I don't have anything negative to say about it and I am looking forward to this to see where you take it an what characters you pair him up with. Though I do have a question regarding that; are u taking suggestions? ^^ update soon.

    Green
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