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Reviews for Making Happy

By : neelix
  • From whingechimes on February 29, 2016
    Damn you, madame, you are corrupting me.

    This was such and unusual setup, it took me a while to puzzle it all out, you kept it going well and something completely different from everything else I read recently. Plus, hot. You have a way with words.
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  • From ANON - Carol Oster on September 03, 2012
    It's not often that a story brings me to frank tears, even if it tears at and warms my heart, but I am crying as I write this. Such a quiet, subtle story... and such intense love. This is utterly beautiful, and I will never forget it. Thank you for writing it and sharing it.
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  • From ladilyndi on May 13, 2012
    I very much enjoyed this story. Thank you for sharing. I'm still a bit confused about how the polyjuice potion was used though. Did both both use it to harvest what was needed from the other?
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  • From Akayuri81 on May 12, 2012
    Thank you for sharing this story with us. I really enjoyed reading it. I usually don't like reading stories with changing points of view, but you've done a really good job here. There is just one little thing you might consider changing, you're using the term "medi-witch" for Harry, as he is male "medi-wizard" would be more appropriate. But other than that, well done.
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