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Reviews for Laun-Drarry

By : MuggleAngel
  • From bloodshound on May 16, 2012
    this was rather fun... there was one typo though. tier is like levels. One tier up to sportswear sort of thing. I think you meant Tire as in, to tire of something. The third Tyre is the round rubber thing we use on our cars. yay for google that helps us check words. ^^
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  • From tbsigma08 on May 16, 2012
    First of all, I love the title! I thought the story was great for a first try. You should try something a little longer next time because I would have love to read more. Good job!
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