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Reviews for A new beginning

By : ladyiceberg
  • From disgruntledfairy on August 07, 2012
    I'm really enjoying reading your story! The plot is fun, but even better is your writing. Spell-binding! The action scenes are awesome, the sex scenes are steamy, and you can visualize almost every aspect of the story. It's fantastic! Thank you for the story and until the next chapter.
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  • From jujukitty on July 20, 2012
    #4- a good story so far, interesting plot adn i like your take on the characters. some parts seem a little rushed, like the bit with kingsley, but otherwise the pacing seems pretty good. you do have a few grammar issues throughout or places where there could have been a better word choice, but nothing major (one little thing, when talking about just two people it's "neither", when three or more, then it's "none"). overall, good story and i look forward to seeing where you go with it
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  • From jujukitty on July 19, 2012
    #1- interesting start to things, liked harry's reaction to snape being injured. only complaint is the part where ron and harry -accio- their brooms, they were nowhere near them so assuming it work from huge distances, they'd be waiting for a while while unmanned brooms flew through whatever muggle and magical areas it took to get to them.
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  • From Madamdragon on May 27, 2012
    I love this. You must continue with whatever plot you have in mind. I wonder how all of them will survive under one roof. But I think I do see Snape and Harry getting closer as Harry will have teddy, and Ron will probably be helping Harry with Teddy and maybe that will get Draco to get closer to Ron. So I hope all works out well and will TRY to wait for an update.

    Hopefully soon.
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  • From Tinkerbabe7 on May 27, 2012
    I do like this story.
    It seems like an interesting build up to the plot.
    I can't wait to see how they will fair living under the same roof :D
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  • From imsandir on May 27, 2012
    I'm really enjoying this fic so far, I like the plot line and the character interaction. Looking forward to future updates to see where you take it.
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  • From LadyAngelEuropas on May 27, 2012
    I really like the plot of this story, its new and interesting. I can't wait to read more and see how you develop each of the relationships.
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  • From bloodshound on May 22, 2012
    blinks... well, that explains how they got started. *pokes them carefully with a stick.
    meanwhile... else where...
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  • From Madamdragon on May 21, 2012
    That was hawt stuff. I bet that magic surrounding them was some sort of bonding, right? Well I hope more is to come soon and hope Snape and Harry will be alright. Hope more is to come soon please.
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  • From LadyAngelEuropas on May 21, 2012
    This is really interesting, i can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From bloodshound on May 20, 2012
    the more things change huh... still, it's a good thing har isn't an auror. arguing on the job like that is likely to get them killed /fired or both.
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  • From bloodshound on May 20, 2012
    blinks. well, that's a most dynamic way to begin a new story. that's positively action charged and it's only the first chappie. ^^
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  • From Madamdragon on May 19, 2012
    Sexual tension is right. I guess Snape might have some hidden feeling for Harry. Hope another chapter is to come soon please.
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  • From moodysavage on May 18, 2012
    Really great beginning. Looking forward to reading more :)
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  • From Madamdragon on May 18, 2012
    Ooh this sounds good. I am anxious to read what will happen next. UPdate again soon please.
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